Never Fall In Love

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by jessisamess, Aug 9, 2013.

  1. Terrorists who flick people. Pretty lame ass story.
     
  2. Sorry I wrote this before you told me

    hehe i like lame ass stories tho;;
     
  3. Yeah I agree about the bypass… >.>
     
  4. Ok I made sure I didn't bypass in this one ^^

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    Renee

    "What's the dress code for this party anyway?" I asked.

    A mischevious smile played on Amanda's lips.

    "Just dress in something that'll get you a lot of guys...something that'll get 'em drooling," Amanda said.

    "I didn't bring anything that'll get them 'drooling'," I said, digging through my suitcase. I don't even know if I have anything that'll make guys drool. I'm only a humble C Size cup and my ass is normal sized. So how is what I wear going to make a difference?

    "What you wear can twist how you look, making your breasts or butt look bigger," Amanda said, reading my mind. "So I brought an outfit for you."

    Amanda handed me the most showy outfit I've ever seen.

    "Go try it on!" She said, "And you're not supposed to wear a bra in those dresses. It gets really tight."

    It was a short, sleeveless dress that didn't even completely cover my butt. I turned around and saw half of my butt hanging out. Pulling the short dress down only showed more of my breasts, which were aready spilling out. If I pulled it down enough to cover my ass, the tips of my nipples peeked out. Great. The dress was made of dark red silk. The sides were made of sheer lace, showing my side boob and making me look more curvy. Sure, it was showy, but it really did make me sexy and I've never looked sexy in my entire life.

    I looked over to see Amanda still wearing the clothes we wore to the airport.

    "Hurry up and change!" I yelled.

    "I'm not going."

    "Why not?"

    "I don't have a date and I need to mourn that a guy actually rejected me today."

    I sighed. "Are you really not going?"

    "Nope."

    "Fine," I said, leaving. That crazy bitch. She was the one that forced me to go and now she's not going? Ugh.

    I walked into the house the party was being held in and couldn't believe my eyes.
     
  5. Keep writing.. You're doing great! Just remember the corrections that people suggested to make it better.. But the story is doing good
     
  6. Getting a lot better. ^.^ Good job. Bump!
     
  7. Love the concept, update please!
     
  8. I hate it when people start this lovely story and then leave it to rot. They make the readers to cry themselves to sleep!