Landon Always go for the guy you think will cause more drama and is twisted... I'm a little ahead of myself~
That would be my preferred option maybe a butler or a hobo. It's your story though I'm just warping the ideas in my head.
Thank you for sending me a message on my wall, Heavenly~ Finally a new fantasy story that I can read~ You did a great start, although I may not be an expert about stories, I actually find it strange that Alessandra just followed a stranger, that had seen her naked body , and even invited her to the castle with no reason. Just like what jenette said~ So yeah, I think it needs more details and an actual plot on the story~ A goal or something. But just like Mel said, you can still try different things! It's your story, you can still find new materials to add on it. We readers will be supporting you, too! GOOD LUCK!
I mean it's not real. It's make believe. And some people are stupid and will do that. It's not like it's a true story...))
Please with all the anime I've watched my logics been warped so I found that completely normal. Yay for the hobos! They must raise up and take over the finical world~ Also agreements to what Blaire speaks of, support~
Chapter Four.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Queen Zalda and Alessandra made their way to the kitchen. Smell the sweet aroma of all the spices and the smell delicious roasted duck, made Alessandra mouth start to water. "I do hope you stay Alessandra. At least for dinner. Maybe longer. We have plenty of room for you. If you would like to stay." Queen Zalda gazes intensely at the water. And a few seconds later it starts to boil. "You can do magic?" Alessandra gasped. The Queen lip slowly curved up. Into a small smile. Then nods without saying Another word. Alessandra bright teal eyes start to glow, he long white hair fluttering around her face. Her lips a rosy red color. And I hold my hand up and a blast of coldness escaped my palm. The Queen looks at me a bit puzzled. "You can too?" She asked quietly almost like a whisper. Alessandra nods slowly. Then stops. And everything goes back to normal. Alessandra nearly collapsed. Her cheeks are flush a light reddish color. The kitchen had little grey stone walls and wooden floors. It was enormous. The servant bows at the Queen. "Anything I can get you ma'am?" The Queen shook her head, left the quickly and swiftly. Alessandra followed fast behind her. "I will stay for dinner....and the night... I'm not sure if I'll stay here... forever. " Alessandra gulped, a bit afraid that the queen with will thin Shes using her. The Queen nods, as if she understood Suddenly the air is filled with screams and shrieks. Alessandra and Queen Zalda heads stared out the huge window. "We're under attack..." The Queen grabbed Alessandra and ran out of the kitchen. Alessandra looked over her shoulder only to see a giant ugly troll. And there were more. A lot more. "Give us the girl!" They scream in a hideous voice. And started to chase us. Now the Trolls Want Me.. I really shouldn't have left the forest.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Poor Alessandra. They just keep on surprising her. I'd hate to be her right now.
BUMP! I agree that this is really unique and understand that it is a fantasy story, but I agree with Blaire on how Erik finds her in the forest, naked, and she immediately follows him . Maybe next time before she follows someone or meets a person, you should say why she is drawn to them . I like this though!