My Only Love

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Karina-The-One-And-Only, Aug 3, 2011.

  1. Im reading it
     
  2. I'm readin it too!
     
  3. No, keep going!
     
  4. Please continue!!
     
  5. NO PWEASE WRITE MORRRREEEEEEE!
     
  6. I'll update later then 
     
  7. Halley was crying on the bench outside.Matt was still putting on his robe.Luke saw Halley crying when he was walking home so he ran to her.
    "Halley! Are You ok? What happened?"Luke asked.Matt reached outside and saw Luke there Matt hid.
    "Matt broke up with me because you kissed me and I kissed you back! Then I walked I'm on him having sex with Lay!"Halley explained crying.
    Luke hugged Halley and kissed her forehead.Matt stared and thought maybe Luke was right for her but he still loved Halley.Matt walked over and Luke stood up with Halley.
    "Halley I'm so sorry ! I didn't mean for that to happen!"Matt said.
    "Listen man just leave Halley alone from now on! She's not your girlfriend anymore!"Luke yelled at Matt.Matt was angry at Luke.Matt ran over to Luke and punched him in the gut.Luke kicked Matt but He blocked it.Matt saw a bat on the ground so he picked it up and hit Luke's face with it.Halley ran over to Luke who was bleeding in his face.Halley started to cry more and louder.
    "Why did you do that Matt?!"
    "Halley I still love you! Luke told me to stay away from you!"
    Halley wiped her tears away.
    "Well then Matt,Maybe you should."Halley picked up Luke and they went over to Her house leaving Matt there all alone.
     
  8. *Then I walked in* I meant to say that in the first beginning if you read
     
  9. Lol keep updating
     
  10. No one reads and comments My story failed
     
  11. It didn't fail! I just hadn't seen it yet. It's good, keep going
     
  12. People read it...
     
  13. Look the writing is about you. If you dont like doing it then stop. If you enjoy writing this story then it shouldnt matter if anyones reading it
     
  14. Yeah, it's pretty much just publicly (sorta) Puting your words out into the world :|
     
  15. I read it!! And I loooovvveed it:)
     
  16. Halley brought Luke to her bedroom since her parents weren't home.She put him on her bed while she cleaned him up.Luke stared into her eyes the whole time.
    "Halley?"He asked.
    "Yes Luke?"
    "I love you"He said.
    Halley finished cleaning him up.Luke sat up and Halley sat next to him.
    "You do?"Halley asked.
    "Yes Halley the moment I saw you I fell in love all over again."Luke said.
    Halley didn't say anything she stared into his eyes and then kissed him.Luke kissed back.
    "I....I Love you too"Halley whispered.
     
  17. Please more!!!awsome story so far!!!