My First Time...Second.....Third .....Fourth.....and baby.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *sexyandclassymix12 (01), Jun 12, 2013.

  1. This isn't even a story. It's like an imaginative writing piece, done by a elementary student, who just wants to be a slut when they're in high school. And Chapter 3 made no sense. You don't just walk away from a fight, like nothing happened. This story is ridiculous. Please stop, fix your story, them post a better version of it.
     
  2. You do realize the writer of this story is not continuing this, and is probably not even active, right?