My Damaged Heart 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by LadySapphire, Aug 29, 2011.

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  1. Very good read the whole thing just now it was amazing !
     
    #941 Karina_rose95, Dec 19, 2012
  2. BUMP
     
    #942 Steltz, Dec 19, 2012
  3. Thank you  didn't know it was still alive
     
    #943 LadySapphire, Dec 21, 2012
  4. Ths was really good read the whole thing at 2am and couldn't put it down. My only advice is don't doubt yourself. Your readers will over look your occasional spelling and grammar errors because overall the story is brilliant
     
    #944 KirraR, Dec 21, 2012
  5. I think every so often this story should be bumped so newcomers can read it. It's a brilliant example of a decent story, and much can be learnt from it. This would be a good way to encourage good writing that contains grammar, detail, etc.
    Just a thought.

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    #945 tash777, Dec 21, 2012
  6. I agree tash , I'm newer to pimd and this is one if the first ready good stories I've read, another was one of yours I'm pretty sure about cross breeds and stuff
     
    #946 KirraR, Dec 22, 2012
  7. Why thank you Tash. You were one of my avid readers on My Damaged Heart. And of course thank you, Kirra for the lovely comment 
     
    #947 LadySapphire, Dec 22, 2012
  8. Ah yes, Bloodlust. Unfortunately I terminated that, it seemed a little too much like The Hunger Games and I prefer to write things that are a little more original.

    This should be bumped, say, every 3 days or so? Depending on how fast it gets pushed down.
     
    #948 tash777, Dec 22, 2012
  9. Bump bump bump :) this didn't belong on page two :)
     
    #949 KirraR, Dec 23, 2012
  10. Bumpbump :)
     
    #950 KirraR, Dec 23, 2012
  11. Bumpiddy bump l
     
    #951 KirraR, Dec 23, 2012
  12. It's very good! A little confusing cuz idk y she broke up with him.
     
    #952 YourBeautifulNightmare, Dec 23, 2012
  13. Because she was dying and didn't want to put him through the pain of losing a loved one...?
     
    #953 tash777, Dec 23, 2012
  14. Agreed tash she felt responsible for her death being to hard for others and distanced herself from the ones she could.


    BUMP!!!!!
     
    #954 KirraR, Dec 24, 2012
  15. Bump
     
    #955 LadySapphire, Dec 25, 2012
  16. I read this in 10 minutes
     
    #956 *Jazmine786 (01), Dec 28, 2012
  17. Bump bump :)
     
    #957 KirraR, Dec 28, 2012
  18. Cool story! You would make a great romance author.
     
    #958 *katie999 (02), Dec 28, 2012
  19. Bump bump bump

    Should be in best of
     
    #959 KirraR, Dec 29, 2012
  20. Jazmine, there is no way you could have possibly read this properly within ten minutes.
     
    #960 tash777, Dec 29, 2012
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