My Damaged Heart 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by LadySapphire, Aug 29, 2011.

  1. So sorry for the delay  i havent been active cause of personal reasons. But i will stay just until i finish this fanfic! 
     
  2. Good Zatty.

    Pls update soon!
     
  3.  hurry before I die!
     
  4. YAY THANK YOU SO MUCH ICE!! 
     
  5. ᎨᎷ ᏔᏘᎨᎢᎨNᏳ[/Size=200][/color=Blue]
     
  6. fail 
     
  7. Bump
     
  8. Bump!!! Update!!
     
  9. ᏴᏌᎷᎮ
     
  10. Update plzzzzzz
     
  11. You keep saying you will update but u don't…  update !!!! 
     
  12. Update please i'm in like love with your story it's absolutely amazing and well described :D can't wait to read the update.
     
  13. ᏌᏢᎠᎯᎢᎬ!!!
     
  14.  HERE IT IS!! Thank you for finding it  i couldnt find it anywhere! Lol  sorry.
     
  15. ICEEE ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE
     
  16. WILL YOU UPDATE?!  IS THAT WHY YOU'RE HERE?!! 
     
  17. Ethan's Pov

    The instant i heard ash yelled, my tongue burnt and my eyelids felt immensely heavy but i didnt care. All that mattered was Kate. She drank it and i fought hard to keep my eyes open if anything happened. Nothing... She didnt wake up. I felt my arms being pulled and i heard the distant yell from ash. My vision blurred and i collapsed to the ground. Everything went dark but my heart kept yelling for Kate.

    Where are you Kate?

    Kate's Pov

    Everything went still and all around me was pitch black. After adjusting, i heard some voices. I recognized my mom and dad's voices. Even my sister was there. Taylor! I wanted to shout but no words came out if my mouth. I couldnt feel my arms and my body reacted to nothing. Am i dead? Memories of Ethan washed through me and i watched every single one of them in awe, not realizing how much i missed him and loved him with all my heart. It made me want to see him,to feel him and to love him.Ethan...Where are you?

    "Look! Her fingers are twitching!" Taylor exclaimed.

    I felt a warm hand grasping mine and warm drops of water dripping on my cheek. Her smooth gentle voice calmed my heart. It was my mothers.

    " Kate! Kate! Can you hear me sweetheart? Kate please... Dont leave us."

    I parted my lips and with difficulty, breathed out a word.

    "Ethan..."

    My mother gasped and i felt more of her tears on my face. She was sobbing and my sister joined her. My warmth of another large hand grasped my free hand and i knew it was mu father's. I slowly opened my eyes. They felt heavy like rocks and my vision adjusted to the surroundings. Mu eyes searched the whole room for Ethan. My mother was on my right with my sister and brother while on my left are my father and ash.

    "Im so glad you're alive Kate" my father said while stroking my cheek.

    My guts swirled and i felt uneasy as i realized ethan wasnt anywhere in the room.

    "Dad...Where is he? Wheres ethan?!"

    "Katie...you should get some rest first okay? Im sure Ethan is alright?"

    "What do you mean?! Whats wrong with him?! Tell me!"

    They all looked down and my chest tightened a bit.

    "He's in a coma, sweetheart"

    Upon hearing the news, my head felt heavy and my breathing fastened. I sat up and tore of the wires. My mother asked what's wrong as she tried to push me back down. I refused to listen to them and fought off all the pain.

    "Ethan! Take me to him! Please! He needs me! Ethan..."

    Tears poured out from my eyes and my voice git shaky. My heart was in panic and i stood up.

    "Katie.Katie...Baby girl, you're still not well yet. Please rest. Ethan's going to be okay. I promise"

    By now my shirt was soaked and i was halfway out the door. They eventually gave up to my stubbornness and took me to his room. I walked in, slowly as possible and immediately burst into tears as soon as i saw his pale thin face. My knees automatically touched the ground and my hand touched his face.

    "Ethan...I'm so sorry."

    "The doctor gave him some treatment and theres 50% chance that he'll wake up"

    I stroked his cold hand with my thumb and silently whispered the exact same words he said to me as i was about to die. I swore i heard him but i knew he wasnt whispering.

    Wake up please. I love you
     
  18.  i didnt get to edit!!!! Shoot! My* The warmth* Of* My* off* got*

    Just change what seemed strange 