My Confusing Love Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *hiUrock (02), Jul 15, 2012.

  1. Ok y'all I will:)
     
  2. I'm sorry, I'm always busy. I will try to write either now/soon
     
  3. Can y'all new my story how will I choose?
     
  4. Y'all waited long enough for it haha

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    Nikki's POV:

    Me, Matt, Fernando, Fernando's friend drove to his house. I must have thought it wa gonna be a little gather up and a house, not to big or small. Boy, was I wrong.

    I walk up those steps to a HUGE house. It was a two story house with a pool and a hot tub. I was surprised. I bet I looked amazed.

    I walked thought the most beautiful house, and most packed. I walked to the pool outside. I took off my shoes and dipped my feet into the water.

    I looked around to see about five boys with black shirts on. I stared at them as they stared at me. Then they walked toward me. "Hey, babe. You look like you need a dip," the biggest one of them said.

    I ignored them and took out my feet of the pool. I walked away from the pool and them, but I was picked up by one of them. "Hey, put me down!" I yelled at him.

    They all started to to swing me. "Come on, babe. We just want you to swim. "No! Put me down, now!" I yelled at them.

    "Yeah, put her down!" said someone behind them. They turned around and stated at the boy who yelled at them. "You stupid idiot." one of them said to him.

    One of them put me down and walked over to him."What the hell did you say, kid?" he asked.

    The boy was kinda cute, if you asked me. He was wearing dark colors and black hair to match. You couldn't see half of of his face, cause it was covered with his hair.

    "I said, 'put... her... down.'" he said slowly, but fearlessly. The guy punched him in the face, hard. It looked like he got really hurt. But he came back up with a scar from the punch. He punched him back.... harder.

    They walked away and he didn't move. I walked over to him. "Hey, thanks for saving me back there. How can I repay you?" I asked.

    He just stared at me then he looked at the ground. "What's you name?" I was interested in the guy that helped me. "I'll think of a repayment later. I got to go," he said quickly. He got up and walked off. He stopped and turned to face me. "My name is Brandon. Then, he left.

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    Kacy's POV:

    "There he is," I said, pointing a Fernando. We were at the party, inside. Waiting for him to take a look at us so me and Sierra can show off.

    Sierra asked,"You ready?"
    "Haha, I was born ready for this."
    "Good, because I'm not."
    "What?"
    "I don't think he will believe us!"
    "It's ok, if you don't wanta do this-"

    He started walking over to us and I was quickly grabbed by Sierra. She started to make out with me. I grabbed her to make it look intense. He walked away, pretty much not even caring.

    "Ugh," she said annoyed, "he didn't even look at us."
    "Because he didn't want to." I looked around and saw half of the people there staring at us. We blushed and walked off.

    I didn't care about the crowd or Fernando. I really cared about Sierra. I could tell she didn't like me the way I liked her. I only wish she did. But she was really good at acting. She even wanted to be an actress. I was all for it.

    One day, she will see me the way I see her. I only wish that.

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    Kaitlyn's POV:

    I had to stay home. My freaking parents wouldn't let me go. The sucked, but I didn't care. I only wanted to be alone with one person. I didn't care who. Just NOT kacy. She pissed me off, even before she dissed me. I didn't care about that now.

    I snuggled up in a blanket and watched old, crappy scary movies. I just hated being alone, so I invited a friend I didn't really care bout. She was all excited and I was like what ever.

    Then, I got a text. It was from Fernando. It said,"You wanta piss someone off?" I uncontrollably got a wide smile on my face. I texted back,"Yes please!"

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    Thank you, for all your support!! I love yall:)
     
  5.  KAITLYN IS GOING TO PRETEND TO BE FERNANDO'S GIRLFRIEND
     
  6. Did u forget Kaitlyn likes Nikki? Maybe she will pretend, or say no and try to make Nikki fall inlove with her hmm
     
  7. But… but… NIKKI NEEDS TO BE WITH MATT!!!!
     
  8. What the heck I'll start writing later
     
  9. And Angela did u forget bout Brandon?
     
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    Matt's POV:

    I asked Nikki to the party cause I started to like her. I don't know why, she just started to.... I can't find the words. I looked for her, inside first. I didn't see her. Then, I finally looked outside.

    She was with some guy sitting next to the pool. He looked beat up, he was gonna beat beaten up. Cause I was gonna punch him in the face. I'm gonna hurt him for talking to Nikki then walking away. That bastèred.

    I walked out to go sit next to her. But she left before I got the chance to. I kept looking for her, but she left.

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    Kacy's POV (past):

    I kissed his sweet lips. They felt so soft and inviting. I couldn't let go of him. He was just so intoxicating. I wanted more.

    We were at the park having a picnic. We brought peanut butter and jelly sandwiches and two coke cans. It was a beautiful sunny day.

    I couldn't believe my parents said yes to this. They didn't like me hanging with boys alone. I was here, with him. So, I mine as well make the best of it.

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    that was the past, just remember that haha hope you liked:) and sorry for shortness
     
  11. Bump!!!!!!! What happens 
     
  12. Oh yeah… I like Brandon better
     
  13. U don't even know if he likes her back:/