Murderer in the Box 2

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ChristianandBells (01), May 14, 2012.

  1. Ali and Fan POV

    They stare at the corner and then bac at each other

    "Well I think we r the only ones-

    The room starts spinning and r now bac in the box.....
     
  2. Story Line POV

    We all stare at each other, Fan, Bella, and Ali. We r the only ones left, seems like this adventure will soon be over...the beds r gone and there is nothing, it's just a big square grey building...
     
  3. Fan POV

    I can't take this anymore, all this killing, I'm starting to actually feel fear creeping it's way into my mind, but no I am stronger than this, I am greater, it can't take me over...

    "Well, hey Bella, haven't seen u in forever" Fan says nervously

    "Yeah, hey glad to c u guys too" she sighs with relief.

    I sit on the cold ground, and looks at them, they had to die, I wasn't the one who will be the loser, I have to win, hopefully it will be some bazaar way they die.....hopefully....
     
  4. Game Controller POV

    Hmmmmm...they seem to be breaking, except for that Bella character, thought she'd show more emotion to the deaths...Fan seems on the verge of breaking, but still strong...and Ali seems to be heartbroken but I just can't get into her mind....let's just break them all

    "Hello fellow competitors!! How was that maze!!" the voice booms through the entire box "This seems to be getting boring for me, so I'm going to shake things up, be prepared for anything my children..." an evil snicker and the voice goes away



    Hmmmm I believe I can take 2 more people down, keep the pretty one alive
     
  5. OMG! *runs around* WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE!!!!!!! But before I die, I'd like to spend 90 more years alive and well 
     
  6. sorry continue either tonight or tomorrow
     
  7. Ninja stars. Can't get a better death than ninja stars!! 
     
  8. BUMP THIS MOTHER, hahaha
     
  9. BUMP! This is so good
     
  10. BUMP this is so good
     
  11. Oops... Stupid ipod
     
  12. Lol ok people I'll update later, promise, keep bumping this story and checking in, deuces!
     
  13. OK IMMA UPDATE ON FRIDAY, STAY TUNE FOR THE ENDING
     
  14. OK READY FOR AN UPDATE