Murderer in the Box 2

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ChristianandBells (01), May 14, 2012.

  1. OK THIS IS THE DAY I WILL UPDATE, THE UPDATE WILL BE IN 2 HOURS, STAY TUNED FOR THE FIGHT
     
  2. Ahhh it's been two hours!!!

    I'm ready 
     
  3. Kk!!! Lemme re read where I started lol thanks for being patient and keep checking in, means a lot
     
  4. We were patient? I wonder what impatient is to you Bells? Haha
     
  5. Story Plot

    The Game Controller is watching, yet you can see only a the shadow of him. He is laughing and watching. Fan throws a punch and Bella moves fast, faster than a blink of an eye. Fan kicks at Bella's feet and she falls but disappears into the ground

    Fan looks around while staying in a boxing stance



    Bella is behind Fan and puts her in a head lock


    Yet Fan counter it's and clotheslines Bella who falls

    Fan picks Bella up and throws her against a rock side and Bella falls to the floor


    Bella however looks at Fan and her eye color is pure red and scars and blood are upon her face, she is unable to move yet stands up


    Bones cracking but she snaps them back into place, her cuts start healing and she stands up and pushes her jaw back into place

    "WHAT THE HECK! Just die you freaking demon!" Fan shouts and Bella runs at Fan....
     
  6. Story Plot POV

    Fan gets flipped over by Bella and flies into the ground but staggers up and tries to stand

    Bella appears behind Fan and spins her around and choke slams her into the ground


    Fan struggles but there are too many broken bones, scars, cuts, too much of her energy is taken away and she lies there with Bella's cold hand around her hot neck

    "Well now Fan, you fight well but I always end out the winner" Bella smiles and tightens her grip

    "I'm sorry your a life less dead soul Bella, but I'm glad I actually have a heart and can make my own decisions" Fan spits

    Bella punches Fan three times in the face

    "If your so sad I'm lifeless and soul less then you can join me" Bella says "however, I don't think I want your soul, I want you to die perishing in the dark deps of hell"
     
  7. Wow...I'm kinda scared of my best friend now...-takes out a shovel for protection and hides from bells-jk
     
  8. Story Plot POV

    Bella picks Fan up and puts her in a half nelson and makes her look at the screen

    "Well done Bell, your fighting has impressed me" He laughs and she says thank you Master "Well now, I believe that Fan here has deserved to see me, for she is going to die soon so I guess"

    A light appears on him and he takes off his hood and he is unbelievable too look at

    His golden hair is highlighted with auburn, his dark red eyes seem evil yet seductive at the same time, he has a crooked smile with scars on his face, he seems like he could be the perfect god of evil, so beautiful to look at....

    Bella looks at Fan who is star struck and tightens her grip and gives Fan two dead legs and Fan drops but is held up by Bella

    "Dispose of her Bell and come to me" the screen lifts and he is standing behind it

    "Yes Master" Bella smiles and turns and drops Fan and stands over her





    Fan looks up and can feel her last breath of air coming and takes a deep breath "See you in hell"


    Bella's high heel smashes into her face and her whole body cracks and Bella walks to her Master and he wraps an arm around her and they kiss.......leaving Fan's souless body to rot in hell.......



    THE END



    I love all you guys, thank you for reading until the last page, I had do much fun writing this, couldn't have done it without you. Comments, concerns or even story ideas u want me to write please say in the comments, PLEASE AND LOVE U ALL. Deuces
     
  9. OMG! tht was amazing yet scary, yet awesome but my body! It's so like dead!
     
  10. Wait...what...you can't just end a story like that...




    NOW YOU HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  11. If I didn't come back alive

    It hasn't ended 
     
  12. love ya fan!! Nothing personal btw, and idk maybe
     
  13. yes make a sequel I need meh revenge
     
  14. Can I be a character in the sequel?! (If there is one, my name is Jada :3)