Mrs. Heartbreaker

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *AngelSweets (01), Sep 18, 2012.

  1. Omg I'm super popular I luvvvvv you princess lol
     
  2. Fantastic writing!
     
  3. Ok, sorry for not updating. I've had like 20 test this week, hopefully I get to update by Sunday.
     
  4. Sorry for not updating lately.
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    I stand there, in the middle of the hallway, my leg soaking wet, and Percy laughing his butt of at me. Finally he wiped tears from his eyes and stood up. I scowled at him and he laughed again, but quickly covering it up be fake coughing.

    Rolling my eyes, I reach into the closet and pulled out my backpack which was, surprisingly, not wet. I swing it on my back and face Percy, who now had serious expression on his face, I frowned.

    "Angel, have...have you been avoiding me? Did I do something wrong? Cause if I did...I'm sorry." He said, sighing and looking at me, his eyes begging for forgiveness. Sighing, I look down guiltily.

    "I'm sorry. Its just after Peter..." But I was interrupted by a small man in a blue jumpsuit.

    "Hey! You kids get away from that closet! Look at what you done did! You spilled my water! Clean it up!" The Janitor yelled at us. I instantly grab Percy's hand and take off running. Percy catches on quickly and is beside me in less then 3 seconds.

    After a few random lefts and rights, I trip. Percy catches me from behind, saving me from falling flat on my face. We stay in the position longer then needed. His warm breath blowing on my neck as he pants from the run we did, and his arms wrapped protectively around my waist.

    Finally he slowly lets go, I shiver as soon as he pulls away, suddenly cold. I turn to face Percy. He was looking at me with a troubled, yet anxious look on his face. I tensed up, wondering if he was going to to ask me why I had been avoiding him.

    "A-angel...I...you? Umm" he sighed, ran his hand through his hair and took my hand. Then he looked me straight in the eye and stupid me stared back.

    "Angel...will you go out with me tomorrow?" He asked, all nervousness gone from his voice. I was prepared to tell him no thank you, but my mouth and brain refused to say those words, so I listened to my heart instead.

    "Sure" I whispered, his eyes taking my breath away. He let out a deep breath and muttered something I couldn't hear, then he gave me a dazzling smile and winked. I gasped, almost fainting, I hated how he made me feel!

    "I'll call you with the details" he said, then he turned around a corner. I stood there for a few seconds, composing my face. When I looked around the corner, Percy was gone.

    Sighing, I lean on the wall and slide down.

    What the heel have I got myself in?
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    Hope you like it.
     
  5. Waaaaah! She's cheating on me with an awsome smooth playa! Waaaaah! He's handsome too and is just like meh! She's cheating on me with me! Nooooooo! Wait...... Yay!!!!!
     
  6. UPDATE IT'S AMAZING I LOVE ITTT
     
  7. I LOVE IT
     
  8. Bump! Bump! Bump! Bump!
     
  9. I stand in front of the mirror, sighing I wiggle out of the dress and return to my closet. For the 100th time I look through my closet, trying to find the right outfit for my date with Percy tonight, Percy said It was formal and that I should wear a dress.

    Finally I pull out a black and sliver dress that I couldn't force myself to throw away, it was my favorite. It was raven black on the left side, and sparkly sliver on the right.

    I slip into the dress and admire myself then I frown.Somethings missing, I think to myself. Instantly I snap my fingers when I realize what it is, I race to my closet and instead of heels I fish out my black hightops. Grinning to myself, I slip them on, then I admire myself. Its formal with my own little twist, I think. Like a earthquake, its hits me what I'm about to do.

    I'm going on a date with Percy! I start jumping up and down again, squealing to myself like a little girl. I actually feel like a real teenager, like all of past didn't happen.

    Tonight...I going to pretend that I didn't meet Peter, that my dad didn't cry, that my grades are still spotless and the top in the class. Tonight Its just going to be me and Percy. I flop on my bed, grinning to myself. Suddenly the door bell echoes through the house.

    A image of my parents answering the door flashes in my mind, and I quickly jump up. I grab my phone and my jacket and take off running downstairs. My dad was just swinging the door open when I scream at him to wait and suddenly my foot catches on the edge of the carpet from the last step and I go crashing down.

    I hear everyone gasp and for a second there was nothing but silence, then my dads heavy laugh filled the room, even Percy and my mom were giggling. Rolling my eyes, I pick myself up and brush off my dress, glaring at all of them while I'm doing it.

    Once I'm up I stand up tall, smooth down my dress, and hold my head up a little. I glare at my parents as I pass them and I glare at Percy too.

    "Hope you guys have a great night laughing at my pain, if you excuse me I have a place to go" I say as I walk past Percy outside. Instantly I feel Percy's arms wrap around my waist as he starts pulling me to him.

    "Aww, I'm sorry" Percy says in a baby voice, burying his head in my hair. I cross my arms over my chest and stand there, planning on never talking to him again.

    "Will you ever forgive me?" He asks, placing his lips right next to my ear.

    "N-no" I stutter out, trying not to focus on how close his lips was.

    "Hmm...good enough for me!" He says, lifting his head from my shoulder but keeping his arms around my waist. I open my mouth to protest when suddenly a flash went off. I squeeze my eyes shut and hold up my hands.

    "Mom! Please no pictures!" I yell, trying to find Percy's hand so I can drag him out of here.

    "Awww sweetheart you haven't brought a guy home in so long, and you guys look so pretty. " She says, giggling a little bit and snapping another picture. I cry out in frustration and finally find Percy's hand.

    I haul him out of there and walking until I reach his car, then I drop his hand and wait for him to unlock the car.

    After a while he did and we both jump in. We sit there for a few seconds, then he turns to me.

    "I'm sorry...I didn't mean to upset you, and laugh at you. I hope that you can forgive me for that sickening show I just did...you highness" he said, then he bows his head till it reaches the cup holders in the middle of the seats. I couldn't help it, I laugh. I was rewarded with a luminous smile.

    "Now that we got that over with, we should go before were late" he mutters, then he cuts the car on and pulls out of our driveway.

    <3 <3 <3

    We drive for a while till finally Percy stops at a restaurant labeled Hollywood Carpet, my eyes go big when we stop. The place was glorious, magnificent, and it was shining as if it really was the Hollywood Red Carpet. I didn't notice Percy get out till my car door opened, and he holds his hand out in front of me.

    I take it nervously and step out of the car. Suddenly I fell insecure about my dress and shoes as I watch other girls walk inside with dresses that cost more then our house. As if noticing my uneasiness, Percy leans down to my ear.

    "You look beautiful and I love how you added your hightops, makes the outfit...more you" he whispers and just like that I didn't feel insecure anymore.

    In fact, I stand up taller and hold my head higher. Percy hooks his arm with mine and we walk up to the restaurant feeling confident and bold.

    Once were inside the place was literally glowing. It was decorated with white and red lights that gave it that sophisticated yet entertaining look. I glance around the restaurant, still feeling a little nervous. I smile when my eyes land on a cubby little baby who was giggling as his mom played peak-a-boo with him. I shift my gaze to a guy and two girls across from the little cute baby.

    One girl had a petite shape and she was wearing a dazzling sapphire blue dress, her hair was put up in a tight bun and she had perfect pale skin. The other girl was wearing a raven black dress that reached the floor. Unlike the other girl, this one had hair that she wore loosely, it was almost look like she was hiding under it. I couldn't see the male completely, but something about his posture was familiar. I felt a light tap on my shoulder and I return my gaze to Percy's patient smile and a young waiter, both of them waiting on me.

    "Sorry" I whisper, giving them a shy smile. Surprisingly, the waitress just laughed.

    "We always get that affect from people, so don't worry" the waitress said as she grabbed two menus and started walking down the aisle of the couple.

    I smile up at Percy and hook my arm with his and we walk down behind the waitress. I focus on the man while we walk, he was turned around talking to someone behind him, the girl also had her face turned. Suddenly the guy whipped back around to face the girl and I froze, my mind screamed one word: run.

    So I let go of Percy's arm and turned around, already planning on sprinting to the door. Sadly, instead of running straight to the door, I ended up running into a plate of food. The plate and the waiter crashed to the floor, I gasped and jumped back. Several people also jumped back and some even screamed. I glanced behind me and my gaze connected with Peter's, the feeling of hatred, yet a little happiness sprouted in me. Thats when the girls looked behind their shoulders to see what happened and my heart stopped beating.

    There, in a seat across from Peter was Violent and beside her sat my ex-best friend.


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    Sorry if spelling mistakes or bad grammar, I just know you guys have been waiting for a while and I hate to keep people waiting sooo...here you go! Let me know what you think! And I hope this longg chapter covers up for when I didn't update! 
     
  10. Haven't seen or heard from Jack in awhile 
     
  11. Jack, your not a main character. Your just one of those bystanders that happened to get mixed up in this. 
     
  12. Well he should be in more
     

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