Modern Day Royalty

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by TheAndi, Nov 17, 2011.

  1. Yaay! A bump!

    Thanks Sensual!  yer story! 
     
  2. Thank yerrrr 
     
  3. What does this story deserve?? A
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  5. this story is amazing!!!!!
     
  6. UPDATE NOW!!
     
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  8. I like this story. Bump!
     
  9. Two pages of bumps? I believe it's time for an update soon. 
     
  10. Yep update plz
     
  11. Bump! Soon you'll have 3 pages of bumps!!
     
  12. PLEASE UPDATE!!
     
  13. Inah tiptoed carefully into her room. Logan was there, whispering to a fast asleep Jennifer, stroking her hair.

    He really did love her, Inah thought as she climbed into her bed. She thought of Prince Thomas...then of Jeff. Why her? A maid?

    She lay her head on her pillow and started to drift to sleep. Izzy...Maria...how was she going to fihure this out?

    ----------THE NEXT MORNING-------

    "HIYA INAH!" a voice squealed at her, startling her awake.

    Her eyes opened wide when she saw Jen standing over her bed.

    "Mornin' sleepyhead! You're pretty tired, eh? It's already eleven! Mdm. Herald let you sleep in though, she gave a speech and you missed it! It was so boring though. Jeff came to check on you around nine. I think he's into you. But who's Thomas? You were muttering his name in your sleep. Someone special? Ooh! Tell me! But still, I think Jeff likes you! You are so likable! Hey! Let's go! It's lunch now! Boy, am I hungry. Breakfast was skipped cause one of the cooks passed. It was sad. There's probaby going to be a memorial soon. Anyway, lunch is going to be great!! I think. I hope. So, go and change already....!"

    As Jen rambled on, Inah studied her. It was as if nothing happened last night. She flung the covers over and stepped on the cool floor. She shuddered, remembering how close she was to smashing her head into it.

    She stepped into the restroom and changed into a new set of the prescribed coat patients were to wear.

    After that, she and Jen walled to the cafeteria, with Jen still blabbering.

    "You know, the last time we had eef was three weeks ago. I remember cause it was cold and we had a food fight and I spilled gravy...."

    "On me." a voice stopped both of them in their tracks.

    Inah stood face-to-face with a girl a few inches taller with straight jet black hair and piercing dark eyes.

    "Hiya Zands! It was an accident by the way." Jen said perkily.

    'Zands' smirked and turned to Inah holding out her hand, "Zandra, or Zands. You should hang out with me, cause I heard she," Zands pointed at Jen, "Went all psycho last night."

    Jen stopped talking, "What?!"

    "Nothing." Inah said quickly.

    "It wasn't nothing. Jen, hun, you started laughing like a hobo, like Inah described you, and tried to kill her."

    Jen stared at her, then at Inah. Hurt and betrayal sparked in her eyes.

    Before either of them could say a word, Jen turned and ran back to the dorms. They heard the door slam shut.

    Inah faced Zands, "Who told you ?!" but she already knew.

    "A little birdie, dear." and with that, she left.

    Inah was fuming mad. Who told her? Well, who else was there that night? Logan? He would never betray Jen. And who else heard her say that Jen acted like a hobo?

    That's right.

    J-E-F-F.

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    Will update soon!
     
  14.  BETRAYAL!! Nice work Andi! 
     
  15. bump!!!!! ii  it 