Mistakes

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by GoddessOfTheWaters, Apr 17, 2012.

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  1. Paragraphing please! Otherwise very good

    Panda
     
    #41 EnglishPanda, Apr 21, 2012
  2. This is good
     
    #42 samn_says_hi, Apr 21, 2012
  3. Yeah... Paragraphing is probably my only issue as of now... 
     
    #43 GoddessOfTheWaters, Apr 21, 2012
  4. Any more feedback, suggestions, or thoughts? All three are appreciated!! 
     
    #44 GoddessOfTheWaters, Apr 21, 2012
  5. I'm so excited to write more on this story that I can't even wait until it's time to release everything! AHHH.... This is killing me!
     
    #45 GoddessOfTheWaters, Apr 21, 2012
  6. I shall await that day...  I love how you're building up the story to set off the fireworks! BANG Haha I LOVE THE STORY! Keep it up! 
     
    #46 Galinina, Apr 21, 2012
  7. Thanks for the feedback!
     
    #47 GoddessOfTheWaters, Apr 21, 2012
  8. I might update late tonight or tomorrow... depending
     
    #48 GoddessOfTheWaters, Apr 21, 2012
  9. WHAT?!? This was in the third page. Unacceptable! I'm debating on which story to update right now...
     
    #49 GoddessOfTheWaters, Apr 22, 2012
  10. I don't feel like a lot of people like this story compared to Father Dearest... I don't know if I'll continue it because I just got an amazing story idea.
     
    #50 GoddessOfTheWaters, Apr 22, 2012
  11. I don't think this is getting a lot of attention and I'm not sure if I want to continue due to the fact that I feel uninspired. Mood swings much?
     
    #51 GoddessOfTheWaters, Apr 23, 2012
  12. Please do. You only updated like twice! 
     
    #52 _SydneyP_, Apr 23, 2012
  13. Yeah... I think I'm just gonna let go of naughty or nice for now...
     
    #53 GoddessOfTheWaters, Apr 23, 2012
  14. Awwe. Okay!
     
    #54 _SydneyP_, Apr 23, 2012
  15. Amazing story very unique ill read it all the way
     
    #55 Kanehex, Apr 25, 2012
  16. Please dont drop this story
     
    #56 Kanehex, Apr 25, 2012
  17. AHHH. thank you! I almost forgot about this story... I am starting to get excited about it again!
     
    #57 GoddessOfTheWaters, Apr 25, 2012
  18. Yes. I am continuing this story. I just need a little time to find inspiration. I know what's going to happen, I just don't know how to make it work.
     
    #58 GoddessOfTheWaters, Apr 25, 2012
  19. Please carry on with Father Dearest! And this
     
    #59 Beth0411, Apr 25, 2012
  20. Blumpz do continue the story updaaaatee soooonn 
     
    #60 *Ladyviolet (01), Apr 25, 2012
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