Well its nice how u keep on mentioning how u don't want people 2 get offended altho it would have been helpful 2 put like a Christian story. Just 2 inform ppl. Although I like how this can relate 2 most of us like I h8 being wrong like most teens We take our parents 4 granted And amazing story so far. I wonder y I gave feedback after one post...hmm Amazing!!!!!!
This time I just wanted to get to 25 posts so it has the scrolling down icon... Stories always seem more popular that way...
Christianity gets mixed up with Catholicism easily. Even when some think they're Christian but their teachings is Catholic, they're Catholic. Just thought I'd put it in there. .-.
I mean, like, Catholicism believes Jesus is God, and that Mary is God's mother, while Christianity believes Jesus is God's son... ._. ._. ._. ._. imma go dunk mai head in the toilet bowl nao.
MADDIE'S "DREAM" Maddie's Point of View ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Tightly gripping the dagger that miraculously appeared in my hold, I marched over towards the tree that beared the Fruit of Knowledge. "Hey," the snake hissed. "Want a bite? This stuff is amazing. You'll see what I see. You'll be unstoppable. You'll be powerful. You'll be GOD!" The little demon sounded like a stoner-strangely enough. Its scales were almost hipnotic. The pattern was irresistably elegant. Angular triangles traced accross its body. Red and black contrasted each other perfectly. "No." I replied firmly. And with that, I grabbed the famous tempter by the neck. I pinned it's long skinny body onto the grass and threw the dagger down, piercing through the creature's heart. Immediately, the once living animal disappeared into thin air. Only gray dust remained-as if it had been cremated. I glanced over at Eve as she arrived at the tree. "Oh, hello," Eve said kindly. Her voice sounded hollow. She looked at me with a glassy look on her face. It was as if a thin film covered her eyes. It was awkward with her standing there like that, naked. "Hi." I replied. Being in her presence gave me chills. She was undeniably beautiful. Her olive skin glowed in the sun. Eve's brown hair waved down to her waist. "Do not eat that fruit. God says it is bad." Eve said simply. She was like a child, but not. There was something off about the way she acted. It was almost robot-esque. "I would never!" I assured her. "Good. It's dangerous. Goodbye now! I must go see Adam!" Eve said as she frolicked away. She spoke as if she had no worries in the world, again, like a child. I decided that the fruit would be no good to keep around because Adam and Eve would be tempted later on as well. I cut the fruits from the tree with precision, making sure that not even one of the fruits had been left behind. With my bare hands, I dug a ditch about 2 feet deep burry the forbidden fruit in. All of them rolled into the cylinder of missing grass and dirt. My already dirtied hands patted the dug out dirt back into the earth, making sure that there was no way that anyone would find the evil fruits ever again. Since I knew that the tree would grow the fruit once again, I grabbed my dagger and sawed away at the stump for what seemed like an eternity. I kicked the plant with triumph and it hit the ground with a satisfying thud. My work was done. I gave the Garden of Eden one last look before I woke up to an unfamiliar setting. = = = = The first thing that I wanted to ask was where my clothes were. I had absolutely nothing on-no bra and not even a thong. It soon came to my mind that I was in my room, but it wasn't the room I had fallen asleep in. ~~~~~~~<><><>~~~<><><>~~~~~~~ Sorry of the update was a little boring! I have a little romance coming to spice things up