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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Knight, Aug 1, 2012.
Ryan: Good -climbs a tree-
Ryan: Slowly makes axe small enough so it fits in his pocket-
(back)
*Starts to tie up meat and hangs it up in a tree*
Ryan: -jumps off tree- Hey person
Hello. Have seen Tay?
Angel -I come up behind Tay-
Tays ova there
Luke: -finishes knocking down all the trees and starts building shelter-
Thanks* walks over to Tay* hello Tay,
Angel -I look from Tay to Percyous and I smile- I'll just go help some1 else -Then I leave-
Walks ova to luke Hmmmm U missed one
Luke: -keeps working on the shelter-
Luke: What?
*hears Ryan* No he didn't! Leave it!
Angel -Goes the way that boy who was talking to Tay went-
So um, Tay, would you like to eat something?
A tree ova there-points to a tree- Forgot it
Luke: I have enough trees
Angel -I walk up to see Luke and Ryan talking to each other- Luke the shelter looks good, so far