Mind Games

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *AdamGontier (01), Sep 22, 2012.

  1. I would… except I always give up on my stories… so probably not.
     
  2. Well, I guess I'm going solo.
     
  3. This is a pretty good story! I've been away for a while, so when I came back to the fanfic forum there's all new stuff! It's awesome!
     
  4. Finally going to update this!!! Damn flu!!!

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    I like helping people, I don't like being dishonest, but I have to be. I was getting hungry, and I needed to get something to drink. I wasn't feeling up to a whole meal, so I walked into a local gas station.

    It wasn't very clean and tidy, it was a bit unorganized, and had nothing to offer more than a few cheap things. The girl at the counter was interested in me, I could tell. She was about twenty, had long, straight brown hair, light brown eyes, and she was exceptionally pretty.

    I swiped some chips off the shelves, and a Dr. Pepper from the fridges. I brought them to the counter, added up the money with the tax and put the cash on the counter right as she was about to tell me the total.

    "Math genius?" She asked me sarcastically.

    "Not quite. Just know how to use my brain." I said smirking as she bagged up my items and set them on the counter. Her beige working outfit was not very appealing.

    "So, you're saying I don't?" She asked defensively.

    "You're a sophomore in college, working day shifts here, and nights at a strip club. I believe you work hard enough. So I think you do use your brain." I say with an arrogant smile.

    "How'd you know that?" She asked taken by surprise.

    "You're working at a gas station, yet your wallet over there is packed with cash. But you're going to college so you have to keep earning that cash back. And no way could you make that much here. So your muscle tone tells me you're a stripper." I say taking a drink of the soda I opened.

    "Simply amazing!" She says amazed. She takes a card out of her purse and hands it to me. "Call me." She says winking at me.

    I walk out and started laughing, sipping my soda, heading back to my place.

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    Finally!!!
     
  5. Lol awesome writing!!
     
  6. Bump keep it up!
     
  7. You really are good at writing. After I read parasite I saw this and got really excited. Update!
     
  8. Sorry, phone was taken away. Lol
     
  9. BUMP BUMP BUMMMMMMMPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  10. I will continue... I'm just so very busy.
     
  11. Bump! Love it!
     
  12. Guess what! I can update tonight!