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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Salrion (01), Sep 3, 2011.
-she shuts one eye in pain and answers- "What?"
"Y..you saved me..."
-she forces a smile on her face and falls back-
"Julie! What's wrong!"
( All of us are feeling weak at the same time )
-she pushes herself up with her hand- "I need to get up...."
-I slowly stand up steadying myself. I lift Julie up-
"now put me down."
-I set you on your feet-
(u were down but w/e lol. I lifted u up on ur feet)
-she tumbles and starts walking- "I need to find it,now....."
( guys...such slow progress)
"Find what?"
(it's Julies fault! She keeps adding stuff!)
(f-ing stop blaming shiz on me...wait!) -she walks faster to the fortune tellers cabin- (your turn)
(no wonder i keep writing long i put a lot of movements in one post)
(lmao) -I quickly follow keeping silent knowing I'll find out-
(God! this is making me anxious! )
(Julie look on the rap forum in off topic lol I just rapped)
(oh my gosh sal! i didnt know you rap!)