UPDATE :3 Blake pov "Now come with me Blake and bring your servant"-The gaurd said unemotionally "Sir...theres surely a mistake what have we done?" I asked "You are under custody because of treason to the king!"-yelled the gaurd "But i did nothing!" i said worridly "Your potion tht was suppose to cure his disease, killed him! Your under arrest for killing the King of Almia!"- yelled the gaurd "But how!? I never given him any poison!" i nervously said I kept on thinking what could have killed him? I didnt add poison nor did i add anything lethal...what couldve killed him? allergies? A new disease? Oh god im so screwed... Elena's Pov I growled angrily when i thre the sword away, i didnt like not having the familiar weight of my sword in my hands...but Blake ordered me too and i have to obey...then i heard the crime, Blake kill the king!? He would never do tht! He couldent possibly add poison...or could he? I dont a thing of herbs...he couldve adden a poison without me knowing...still i vowed to protect him with my live...meaning ill even kill the king to save him...then i did the most brave and stupid thin in my life... I tackled the gaurd to the floor and broke his neck... MURDER!!!
Make sure you Capitalize words: "I ate cereal." Charlie coughed. "Well, that's good." his mother replied.
Collin i never insulted anything you made just say tht once you got Blizzy in your tail you might not be able to show your face here
Update!!! :3 Blakes Pov What Elena did made me into a stone (not literally) i kept on looking at her, my face saying "Elena what the hell are you doing!?" Elena yelled at me to run...and i did, i ran through alleys, climbed rooftops and hid in bushes. All while trying to escape from 10 gaurds, i ran and ran until i was outside the kingdom and mounted my horse Shiver. I didnt look back until i was sure i was far from the gaurds and until the only thing i heard was the clattering of Shiver's hooves Elena Pov "RUN BLAKE RUN!" I yelled at Blake so he could escape. After killing the gaurd i ran to my sword and sheild and hold back a smile at the familiar weight of my sword and sheild. I got ready when another gaurd came running and saw the lifeless corpse, then he yelled for reinforcements and i got in a fight...sword hitting against each other were heard, sheild being used as a punch were seen and blood spilled everywhere....then i looked down at the mountain of corpses in the floor and wiped the blood of my clothes then i ran to meet Blake... I think this was a good update