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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Percyous, Aug 7, 2012.
Jack: but Percyous is...
John:Here.
Jack: -stands and slowly backs up- something doesn't seem rigjt
*right
Annabeth:-looking confused still-
John:Think what you want. James:*walks inside* Thought I'd find you three here.......
Jack: uh... Hi James -ready for something bad-
James:*nods* John, he here? John:Yes James:They ask? John:No, she grieved. Cut him off
Jack: -sits and grabs dagger from boot secretly, but doesn't pull it out yet-
Annabeth:-glares at James- you tricked me didn't you?
James:Unstrap her. John:*nods and starts to unstrap annabeth*
Annabeth:-glaring at James-
James:No, what makes you think that? *glances at Jack*
Jack: -holds onto dagger-
Annabeth:because your you.
James:I didn't.
Jack: I'm going to go -slides down bench to leave-
James:Stay. We need to talk.
Jack: I would love to but I'm a busy man
James:Stay Jack.