Malice

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *0_0-ForeverAlonex3 (01), Jun 19, 2011.

  1. On fb and i will start to rp her at school i am making a rp of Clan fights like DeathClan vs AuroraClan only its

    ___Clan Vs StoneClan thats my Clan

    Which is lead by Petalstar formerly lead by Stonestar then Skystar and before them Vinestar . The leader is Stonestar and Honeyleaf's kit and her sister is Silversnow . Her apprentice looks like Bluestar and has stripes and is called Dewpaw .

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  2. U know how i mentioned Honeyleaf well she looks like Honeyfern . She has red eyes though.

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  3. Skytree's father , Skytree looks like his kit .

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  4. ... I'm sorry, but can we please stay on topic and focus on the story???
     
  5. Better stop dreaming of the quiet life -
    Cos it's the one we'll never know
    And quit running for that runaway bus -
    Cos those rosey days are few
    And - stop apologising for the things you've never done,
    Cos time is short and life is cruel -
    But it's up to us to change
    This town called malice.
    Rows and rows of disused milk floats
    Stand dying in the dairy yard
    And a hundred lonely housewives clutch empty milk
    Bottles to their hearts
    Hanging out their old love letters on the line to dry
    It's enough to make you stop believing when tears come
    Fast and furious
    In a town called malice.

    Struggle after struggle - year after year
    The atmosphere's a fine blend of ice -
    I'm almost stone cold dead
    In a town called malice.

    A whole street's belief in Sunday's roast beef
    Gets dashed against the Co-op
    To either cut down on beer or the kids new gear
    It's a big decision in a town called malice.

    The ghost of a steam train - echoes down my track
    It's at the moment bound for nowhere -
    Just going round and round
    Playground kids and creaking swings -
    Lost laughter in the breeze
    I could go on for hours and I probably will -
    But I'd sooner put some joy back
    In this town called malice.
     
  6. I sighed, something I did a lot. I didn't feel like a leader. I didn't feel at all. Numbness, as I thought of Kenny. My heart and body yearned for him. My stomach flipped and I ate without tasting, just pushing my food around mostly. The day passed dully, but I had to be a leader. Even in dark days. After breakfast, I jotted down in my book. leaders must show strength even in dark times, must not let emotions come before my herd. Then, the moment. Grandpa allowed Cal to drive his mini van and we were a a huge mall. My eyes bugged out, and I stared in awe. "OMFG" Jen said. "Okay kids, we're just stopping here so you can...Grandpa said, watching our backs as we rushed in. 2 hours later, we were all content. "Okay...now we go buy essentials." he mumbled. This time Jen got to drive. Finally, we got to Walmart. Quickly with a cart full of tooth brushes, underwear, deodorant, makeup, clothes, and a bunch of food, we were in line. We all decided to pitch in and pay it without grandpa's help. The total came out as 234.46$. I pulled out all of my money, and we scrounged enough to cover it all, not a cent to spare. Then came the task of it loading all into the car. Cal, being able to go at super speeds, brought most of it in. But Damien helped a lot too. Actually, those two did it all. We girls and grandpa basically just sat in the van. I pulled out my little book, as I was alone in the back. note to self: don't have sex...it just leave you distracted and wanting more...I don't need this. I have to concentrate on the task at hand. Figuring out this shit. as we got home I couldn't stop thinking of it.
    By afternoon I was squirming. Being leader and figuring it out was soon far from my mind. As the day dragged by, I fidgeted uncomfortably. Finally that long day was over. After Brushing my teeth I dove into bed and waited till everyone else was a asleep to teleport. In the bed, to my surprise, Kenny was sitting up, reading a book. "So you're back huh?" he said looking into my eyes. I hoped you would. I couldn't stop thinking about you." he murmured, me walking to him purposefully. "So beautiful. The feeling of your skin, everything about you drives me wild." he said, grabbing me shoulders and pulling me on the bed under him. I panted and quickly there was nothing between us, not even clothing. The tenseness of my body left me. Early morning again, but this Time I could barely summon enough strength. I looked at him before I left. Gently I kissed his sweat covered neck. "Kenny...I have to be a leader...I can't keep having you as a distraction." I mumbled. "What's more important, them or..." he pulled me close and I could feel his hot breath mingle with mine. "me?" he whispered. I knew the answer. "I have to Kenny, there's no other direction...no...I have to take care of my herd...Goodbye Kenny...I hope we meet again." and that, is how it all began.
     
  7. *by the shoulders not me shoulders 
     
  8. OMFG this just got like flippen amazing. Such good writing in the last update!
     
  9. Fuck yeah MINI VAN
     
  10.  that's hot
     
  11. I drooled a bit there 
     
  12. I want my character to end up looking like this guy 

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  13. Stay on topic of the story guys •_•
     
  14. Waaaay to much random crap... Focus on reading the story and commenting.