Mafia Wars

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Ali-Touched_By_Weeping_Angels, Jan 9, 2015.

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  1. ???: "You'd really keep me from seeing my own injured daughter?"
     
    #641 Satans_Crow, Jan 27, 2015
  2. Vinnie pulls him back out before he's even in the room and straight on punches him in the face sending him straight to the ground.

    "Who and what the hell do you think you are just waltzing in there while they are working on saving her fucking life you worthless piece of trash"
     
    #642 Fume, Jan 27, 2015
  3. "And do you know something... Yeh! You haven't shown your face in so god damn long that I think she wouldn't give a shit if you were dead or not. I just may of saved her God damn life so show some fucking respect old man!"
     
    #643 Fume, Jan 27, 2015
  4. Name: Gordon Dales
    Age: 47
    Looks: (I'll have to get Kat to post a pic again.)
    Mafia: English
    Role: Bodyguard
    Personality: Strong-willed and athletic for his age. Likes to manipulate others.
    Bio: Taught Mia everything she knows when she was a teen. He disappeared after she finished highschool because he was wanted by the CIA. The English mafia erased his records in exchange for his help as a bodyguard.
     
    #644 Satans_Crow, Jan 27, 2015
  5. (I'm so confused)

    The monitor starts beeping again
     
    #645 Blood_Goddess_Kalysta, Jan 27, 2015
  6. (Who the heck said he could make that character. He would need kats permission for that. What kind of right minded person barges straight into a hospital room too. Great father skills )
     
    #646 Fume, Jan 27, 2015
  7. "Max.. It's beeping again.. She's fine" Vinnie says with a sigh of relief.
     
    #647 Fume, Jan 27, 2015
  8. (If your daughter was just shot, you would want to see her too)
     
    #648 Satans_Crow, Jan 27, 2015
  9. Max pat his back. "Good to know..."
     
    #649 Blood_Goddess_Kalysta, Jan 27, 2015
  10. (still who the hell said you could make this character?)
     
    #650 Fume, Jan 27, 2015
  11. (No one did. I'm still waiting for it to be accepted by Kat or Ali.)
     
    #651 Satans_Crow, Jan 27, 2015
  12. (Exactly so don't use him until it's accepted instead of barging in)
     
    #652 Fume, Jan 27, 2015
  13. (COOL IT YOU TWO!)
     
    #653 Blood_Goddess_Kalysta, Jan 27, 2015
  14. (If he wasn't accepted, then you back as though nothing happened. Others have done it before me.)
     
    #654 Satans_Crow, Jan 28, 2015
  15. (Right whatever paladin, just quieten down for once please)
    "Are we ok going back in..?" Vinnie says looking at the doctor.

    The doctor nods and Vinnie walks in sitting back down in his chair.
     
    #655 Fume, Jan 28, 2015
  16. (Ok! Both accepted! Now stop it!)

    Mia remains the same but alive
     
    #656 Blood_Goddess_Kalysta, Jan 28, 2015
  17. (Oh...God....)
    "Max..do us a favour and keep him out.." He says as he takes mias hand. "Now that's the fighter I know..."
     
    #657 Fume, Jan 28, 2015
  18. Max: "I am not your slave dude."
     
    #658 Blood_Goddess_Kalysta, Jan 28, 2015
  19. "Just please max...I don't see you as a slave. You are my cousin, but mainly a friend."
     
    #659 Fume, Jan 28, 2015
  20. Gordon: "Max. You will let me see my damn daughter."
     
    #660 Satans_Crow, Jan 28, 2015
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