Lovely...

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *TaylorrLovesYou (01), Jun 7, 2012.

  1. ^^ sorry I forgot personality.

    Nice, friendly, hard to earn her trust, funny, can be quite vein though.
     
  2. Do you mean vain? Veins are where blood travels…
     
  3. You're back
     
  4. It's a miracle!
    Haha but yes, yes I am.
    And I have a question for you !
    Well, my readers... What's left of them... ):
     
  5. Well... I was thinking.
    Should I continue this? I dont know how many people like it or are even reading anymore.
     
  6. Yeah you totally should (new reader)!!! It's amazing!! Do you still need another character?? If you do then wall me!!
     
  7. Well thanks! And I think I'm good... I'll go read my characters thy people have given me and I'll get back to you 
     
  8. I want my readers back...:
     
  9. I bet most of them are inactive… but the new pimd people will probably read it and like it!
     
  10. Haha Okayy. So... Update?:)
     
  11. ()()()()()()Adrián's Point of View()()()()
    We had 9 cars loaded up with mine and Mallory's belongings, and some of the guys I met at school were driving them. I didn't know exactly where I was going, but as long as my father wasn't there, it was good.
    I remembered passing a beach front condo place when Mallory and I were going to the mall, so that's what I was looking for.
    After a good 15 minutes of driving in circles, trying to remember where the damned place was, I found it. 'Rolling Seas Luxury Beachfront Condos'. I drove up to the big iron gate and it slowly started opening. We pulled up to the front, and I went into the lobby.
    "Hi, sir. Something I can help you with today?" An older red haired lady greeted me from behind the front desk.
    "Yes, actually. I'm looking to buy one of your condos." I said with a smile.
    "Well, we're going to need a parents permission if your not of age... And I'm not sure they're in your price range...." she trailed off and looked down at her wrinkled hands.
    "Ma'am, I'm 18. My name is Adrián Brynn. I'm fairly certain your condos are in my price range." I replied, with the least disrespect I could manage. I hate people who stereotype.
    "Oh. Okay. Well we'll go look at some of out open condos, fill out some paperwork, and you'll be good to go." she grabbed a set of keys off the counter and gestured for me to follow her.
    "Now, you see, we have a wide variety. Right now, I have a two story, four bedroom, three and a half bath, with walk in closets in the bedrooms, and a spacious living room on both of the floors. The kitchen is on the first floor, granite countertops, tile flooring, electric stove, and a top of the line oven. It is also fully furnished with white furniture on the main floor, and leather on the second. You are allowed to paint and redecorate as you wish. You have full access to the covered garage under the lobby as well. This condo is 100,000 a month. I also have a three-" I cut her off.
    "The first one is fine. Let's get to the paperwork."
    Oh boy was there a lot of it... I must have signed my name over two dozen times. But by the end it was worth it. I texted the guys and Mallory to tell them to start unloading. Mallory was the first one in. She ran up to me and hugged me, I felt her tears on my shoulder.
    "I'm so sorry, Adrián. Thank you so much. I love you." She pulled away and wiped her eyes.
    "Don't apologize. It's fine. It's for the best. I love you too, little sister."
    I led her into the elevator and up into our new condo. Her eyes grew wide, and she gasped.
    "Welcome home."
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    Okay guys, I'm sorry if I don't have all the details right. I'm still trying to get in the swing of things... But thanks! :)
     
  12. It's awesome!! Bump!!