Love me or leave me.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *natalie101 (01), Oct 8, 2011.

  1. I think I'll just quit this game once I'm done writing this story. I just don't wanna leave it unfinished...
     
  2. I love this story
     
  3. Thx Katy! I'll update today
     
  4. She pulled her hand away and ran down the hall. "what'd you do to her?" Dylan asked still watching her run off. "nothing. Why do you even care?" collin didn't let him finish and he ran after her. Natalie was really fast. For a girl. She ran out of the school and down the street. When she was far away from the school she stopped. "forgetting something?" asked a warm familiar voice. It was collin. "no I don't think so...wait what?" she spun around and saw collin standing behind her holding up her phone. "uhhhh thanks...I ummm might need that later." she reached for her phone and put it in her back pocket. They were standing on the corner of the side walk until Natalie's phone vibrated. "I should get going. Thanks." she pulled out her phone and was reading a text from...collin? She walked into the street when a car honked and ran straight into her. She hit the windshield and rolled off the hood of the car. It turned out the driver was driving 85 mph...drunk. She opened her eyes and saw collin looking down at her holding her phone calling 911. "I-I-Iove you." that was the last thing she said before she closed her eyes and turned her head to the side.
     
  5. Ok as promised I updated. Any comments?:)
     
  6. It's the best story could u read mine
     
  7. Of course! What's it called?
     
  8. I guess not?.... :/ oh well I'm done writing this. It's a waste of time
     
  9. Continue!!!!!!!
     
  10. Sorry. I don't think anyone reads it
     
  11. I do pls continue my story "High School" is horrible I dot even why I started it but ur story is soo much better than mine
     
  12. Ok I'll continue with this
     
  13. For the what? Four people that read this?