*style other than that it seems ok except you switched to 1st person for a sentence, then most of the paragraph in 3rd and then a sentence in 1st then 3rd keep it only one
The bell rang it was time to go home. Jessica walked as fast as she could out of class so she could get home. Of corse Micky just had to interfere with her life again. Pushing her into the lockers she walked away laughing her butt off. Jessica dropped her books and a bunch of her papers. Even though Jessica wasn't that popular she still had a couple of friends and one was Nikki. She had brown wavy shiny hair, brown eyes, tan skin, and she had some really nice clothes to. She is really pretty but she still has a nice, caring personality. She just happened to be Jessica's best friend. Nikki helped Jessica pick up her stuff. "Hey are you walking home?" Nikki asked Jessica. "Um. Yea. Why?" answered Jessica. "Oh I just thought I could walk with you. If that's okay." said Nikki in her caring voice. "Sure I could use some company." said Jessica happy Nikki was her friend. "So Danny told me you were having more trouble with your mom." said Nikki insisting they talk about it. Jessica told her about the fight they got into last night and the dream she had. The conversation seemed like for ever until they finally reached the neighborhood were Jessica lives. All of the sudden Nikki's mouth dropped as she stared at Jessica's house. It was covered with police and ambulances. Jessica followed Nikki's eyes. Once she see saw it she fainted. When she awoke she found herself laying on a police station bench next to Nikki. She starts crying asking Nikki what happened. "Im so sorry Jessi. You mom died of an over dose." said Nikki whipping her eyes as an officer walked up to her. Seeing that Jessica was now awake she started explaining what would happen to Jessica. "Your mom never said where you were to go if she...she died. Since your dad is nowhere to be found you will have to stay at an orphanage." said officer Plump. Nikki stood as she saw her mom walk in. They looked exactly alike. Her name was Betti. She was a little taller than Nikki and she was just as caring. Jessica's mom and Betti use to be very good friends until she got into her drugs and alcohol problem. "Jessica will not be going to an orphanage she can stay with us!" said Betti. "I'll sign the papers now and everything if I have to she has already been through enough and does not need to be put in that position." Betti says again.
I wanna b ur friend. I'm emo. Sh. Amber eyes Black hair Black staples shirt that covers chest. Star sneakers up to knee Long black pants 13
Jessica couldn't stand hearing the officer and Betti argue about who was going to keep her. Her moods changed from sad to irritated and angry. She was so full of rage. She stood up and whipped off her tears and walked out the door not letting the hands of the officer hold her back. "There is no point in following her she will come back when she is ready." Nikki said. Betti and the officer turned to face Nikki for a few seconds and then continued arguing over Jessica. The day was sunny but it felt as if it should be storming to Jessica. Her legs felt squirmy and her stomach was sour. She couldn't stop thinking about what had happened. She was parentless. She had no family and a few friends. She felt like there was no place in the world for her. When the park was finally in sight she started to run to it. Tripping on a rock she fell to the ground. Her emotions held her down. A hole was added to her already full of holes jeans and a scrape was added to her fragile skin. Getting up seemed to hard so she stayed down. In a distance she saw a figure running towards her. Just far enough to where she could see it but barely make it out. What was it? Did the officer chase her any ways? Was it Nikki? She didn't know till it finally reached her.
When the skinny figure arrived she saw it was a girl that looked to be about 13. She had beautiful amber eyes, black frizzy hair, and pale skin. She was wearing a black staples shirt and long black pants. Her boots came up to her knees and were covered in stars. "Are you okay?" she asked sounding worried about Jessica. She held out her hand waiting for Jessica to reach for it. The new stranger seemed nice to Jessica but she still could not gather her strength up enough to grab the kind hand that was being offered to her. After the strange girl got tired of holding out her hand she sat next to Jessica. Jessica feeling like a blob of slime stuck to the ground was able to get a few words out of her mouth "Hi my name is Jessica.". They shook hands and stood up. Barley able to stand on the hurt knee Jessica limped to the bench and took a seat and her new curios friend followed.
At first it was an awkward silence. Then the stranger finally said something."The names Cenaceinta. But you can call me Cenace.". "Cool." Jessica said feeling bad at the way she said it. "Sorry I didn't mean to sound like I didn't care it's just.." Jessica's voice trailed off. She didn't want to finish the sentence. "It's okay I already know what happen. The whole neighborhood knows." said Cenace. "That's just great." said Jessica. They sat in silence again not knowing what to say to each other. The sky started to get darker as night was coming. The wind started to pick up and rain started to sprinkle down over them. A couple drops fell on the scratch that was left on Jessica's right knee. A feeling of pain ran through her body and she hissed as it started to sting. "You better get something on that." said Cenace in a completely dull voice. She pulled out a bandage from her pocket and handed it to Jessica. Jessica gave her a weird. "My orphanage master makes us cary them when we leave the orphanage." said Cenace. "Your an orphan?" asked Jessica. "Yea my mom,dad, and little brother died in a car accident on the way to pick me up from a party I wasn't suppose to go to." she said in a sad voice sounding like she might cry. Jessica automatically felt sorry for even bringing it up. "I'm so sorry." said Jessica getting upset all over again. "It's okay." said Cenace while she reached into her pocket. It got silent again and Jessica thought she should put on the bandage. When Cenace pulled out her hand from her pocket it revealed a silver long looking thing. Jessica didn't quite get a good look at it. Cenace pulled up the sleeve from her jacket and picked up the item again. It was a knife."Stop what are you doing!" Jessica yelled. "I'm just cutting off the strings from my jacket." she said calmly. "Oh I thought you were going to cut yourself." said Jessica relived. Cenace began to chop each little string that fell from her sleeve. Jessica's phone began to ring. She pulls it out and notices it is 6:00. "I have to go my mom is.... I mean my friend is waiting for me at the police station." said Jessica noticing how she accidentally said mom. "Okay bye." said Cenace as she got up from the bench. She then started walking away. They both walked their separate ways.
Can i be in it ? Jennifer 18 Blondie hair blue eyes Beautiful girl Has lots of friends Moral enemies with Micky Marie and her friends She accepts school tardys without talking back to the vice principal