Love  Square

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-Ayano-Fire-Konachan- (01), Nov 13, 2011.

  1. No one's reading
     
  2. Bro. UPDATE NOOOOOOW.
     
  3. Sydney I'm a girl 
     
  4. Writer's Note

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    I literally ran out of ideas.

    I just watched a funny movie, and everything my mind just went away...

    I'll be updating tomorrow afternoon. 4 more days and school's over, so I can continue this.

    Thanks for your support, I just started.

    I'm going to try to make it interesting once I get to the exciting part.

    I ALSO NEED MORE CHARACTERS.

    Suggest some you can fit in below 

    They MUST be:
    Friends of main characters

    OR

    Related to main characters

    They can't be main characters, I'm sorry.

    The main characters, BTW, are:

    Livi Parks
    Jason Knightley
    Hannah Kensington
    Milton Golde

    -Thanks-

    And I'm not a dude. I'm a dudette 
     
  5. CHAPTER 4

    Livi's POV
    Jason brought me to a fast food place. SWEET! 

    I hope this 'friend date' goes well.

    "Be right back." he said, after we sat down at a clean, shiny 80's dining set.

    As I waited, I saw an old man outside the resto. He was selling bracelets.

    'Poor man,' I thought and went outside.

    Hannah's POV
    My turn Livi.

    As I looked at her, wearing a super ugly outfit, walk outside, I thought that she was gonna stay there for awhile, so I sat at where she had just now.

    A few minutes later, Jason opened his mouth and went like, "Whatcha doin' here?"

    "Jason, have a seat." I said. He did.

    "I need to tell you something.." I whispered

    "What? Tell me." he whispered back.

    "Stay away from Livi or I will kill her. You don't want that to happen, do you?" I said, wide-eyed.

    "You've got to be kidding right?" he said, doing a little laugh.

    CUTE GUY 

    "I'm not to be kidding." I said.

    I took out something from my pocket and showed it to him.

    "This is also included in the punishment." I smirked.

    I saw his mouth open wide. His hair stood straight up, and his left eye was twitching.

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    WHAT WAS THE THING SHE WAS HOLDING?

    =TO BE CONTINUED=

    I had this idea.. So my next update will still be tomorrow.
     
  6. Great bump more how old r they
     
  7. Read first 2 chapters...


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  8. wait I thought they were like 12 and 14?......bump
     
  9. wait I thought they were like 12 and 14?.....
     
  10. Pretty much.

    Updating now 
     
  11. how did he have a sports car and how did he drive her to the fast food place?......not complaining still love the story....
     
  12. Love ;) buumpdate!
     
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    update very soon plz
     
  14. Updating in a few mins, just gonna charge a little 


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