... Oh ya I forgot to yell something PERCY IS RIGHT YOU HAD NOTHING GOOD TO SAY ABOUT CLEARLY A GREAT STORY!!! SO GO .... (how do I put this nicely) AWAY! (what? I couldn't think of anything else!
May I say one thing? Princess, you're a great friend. Qin, I admire you. So I'm not taking any sides. Okay. Now that we've gotten that cleared up. Princess, your writing does need a little improvement. Everyone's does. We can only get better. You are already a terrific writer, but if you follow Qin's advice, you'll be even better. You shouldn't discontinue your story. It's good so far. Qin, perhaps you could make your advice sound more like constructive criticism than criticism. All of it is very helpful, so you should say that, but replace the insults with compliments on what she's already doing well. Most writers' friend's tend to get a tad defensive of the writer. Make it sound really nice, so they can see that you are trying to be helpful Percy and Tarru and everyone else, please give Qin a break. Qin is only trying to help, and by screaming and insulting, you aren't helping anything. Thank you My friend's last name is Qin
Thanks. I really appreciate your comment. I'm just trying to make peace here, but I guess it's not working.
Percyous be nice darling, and Angel, thank you for saying that. For a second I just thought my writing sucked when Quinn said that.
You're welcome Percy, I'm not trying to disrespect anyone, I'm just stating my opinion. I really think you should continue this. It's good!!
Trust me Percyous, I'm mad too. It hurt when she said that I should have known all of this since I first took english, but being angry won't solve anything.