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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *LilySnape (01), Oct 22, 2011.

  1. okay okay I'll add more x
     
  2. Back to the present

    Severus couldn't hide his pain for her not anymore.
    "Lily, I'm taking you to a hospital right now!" Severus said firmly.
    "And... What... Excatly... Are... You... Going... To... Tell... Them... Eh?" Lily replied between laboured breaths.
    "I... Don't know but Lily I can't just sit here watching you in pain!" Severus answered. His face creased up when Lily let out a bloodcurling scream.
    "Please Lily..." Severus' eye's were filled with tears as she let out yet another scream "Lily..."
     
  3. James Potter

    Lily's mobile buzzed reapetedly but Severus couldn't bring himself to leave her, not when she was in this much pain. Eventually Severus grabbed the phone whilst holdibg Lily's hand.
    "Hello Lily Evans phone?" Severus said quietly into the phone.
    "Lily? Where is Lily?" A deep voice asked that Severus knew very well asked. Severus sighed.
    " James it's Severus. I think Lily's gone into labour early-" Severus began.
    " Oh god... um have you phoned 999?" James asked with a hint of worry in his voice.
    "N-No she won't let me!" Severus replied tears now running down his face.
    "All right then... um I'll get a doctor there then they will be there soon." James said then hung up the phone.
     
  4. James Potter

    Lily's mobile buzzed reapetedly but Severus couldn't bring himself to leave her, not when she was in this much pain. Eventually Severus grabbed the phone whilst holdibg Lily's hand.
    "Hello Lily Evans phone?" Severus said quietly into the phone.
    "Lily? Where is Lily?" A deep voice asked that Severus knew very well asked. Severus sighed.
    " James it's Severus. I think Lily's gone into labour early-" Severus began.
    " Oh god... um have you phoned 999?" James asked with a hint of worry in his voice.
    "N-No she won't let me!" Severus replied tears now running down his face.
    "All right then... um I'll get a doctor there then they will be there soon." James said then hung up the phone.
     
  5. sorry i posted the last one twice :/
     
  6. Oh it's ok bump
     
  7. Arrival

    James pulled up just outside Lily and Severus' house and sighed
    "That should be me and Lily in their not him." He thought to himself.
    Just then the door swung open and Severus was stood there and he looked like someone had just sentenced him to the dementors kiss.
    "Where's the doctor?" Severus demanded.
    "He'll be here shortly." James replied " Now where's Lily you haven't moved her have you?"
    "No I haven't!" Severus said impatiently. Then there was a crack and appeared a tall and skinny looking wizard.
    "Hello, you must be Severus. James has told me what has happened and he believes that she has gone into labour early now how early would this be Mr Snape?" asked the doctor.
    "Um... About three months early?" Severus replied.
    "You look worried just go and sit down and I'll take care of the rest." Said the doctor .
     
  8. Inside the house

    Lily was panting uncontrollably.
    "SEV... WHERE... ARE ... YO-" Lily was cut off by another scream. Then someone Lily had hoped wouldn't come came through the door.
    "YOU... GET... OUT... OF... MY... HOUSE!!" Lily screeched.
    "Now, now Lily we don't want that baby hurt now do we?" He smiled.
    "YOUR NOT TAKING MY CHILD!" Lily said in a hurry before she let out another scream.
    "Oh but I am! You see that's what happens when you mess with magic you can't handle you filthy mudblood!" He said simpily. Lily looked up then and saw him properly he was disguised in a doctors uniform.
    "WHERE'S... MY... FIANCE!!!" Lily screamed at him.
     
  9. meanwhile...

    Severus was pacing in Lily and his bedroom. James was watching him pace.
    "Will you sit down!? Your making me anxious!" James said.
    "I don't trust that doctor where did you find him?" Severus replied ignoring James' comment.
    "Um... Well I was on my way to the hospital to get a doctor for Lily and I got there he was stood outside the hospital and he said he was waiting for me as if he knew what had happened he said he was a wizard doctor and I thought that he would be fine so i gave him your address and he said he'll meet me here." James answered. Severus' mind was racing ,his heart started to hurt as he heard Lilys' scream's start up again.
    "I still don't trust him..." Severus muttered.
     
  10. Back downstairs...

    "I... Know... What... You... Are... I'll... Tell... Them... All!" Lily threatened as best as she could.
    "And why would they believe a bumbling lunatic?" He replied.
    "HEY... I'M... NOT... A... LUNATIC!" Lily replied Angrily. He gave her a sypathetic look. "I... DON'T... WANT... YOUR... SYMPATHY!" Lily said her eyes welling up with tears.
    "I didn't say you did. Now your going to have to push i'm afraid." He retorted simpily. Lily pushed hoping that Severus would come downstairs and see for himself who is properly after all he can't stand being away from her...