Killer of night

I thought the organization was bad?

 

let’s hear it

 

So basically...the Zodiac Killer?

 

?

 

You have many new stories but not many or even any completed ones you should work for ata creating hunt themes

 

Oof

 

If you want to make a story, please know how to properly write one tbh.

 

WHERE IS PART 3 FFS

 

I'm helping in his investigations. I want to be a great detective one day.

 

Oh of course legendary writing man. You know exactly how to write a story, but allow me to make some tweaks and maybe a critique.

This story has points that left me confused because it was lacking filler information. The description of the crime scene was horrid. Jumbled texts doesn’t really add to a good reading experience. The wording and grammar is bad. Spelling mistakes were common and overall, it was just boring.

 

Bruh.. do you. I love your stories.

 

Don’t pull the special needs card. You’ll get no sympathy from me.