Sorry I've heard a guy say "Come push my buttons" Since then I've always thought it was a pick up line or something.
>.> i think everybody does this as a hobby, or people would be selling their stories as books <.< if they did this professionally
You make feel me stupider by the minute. I know I know go ahead make of the girl that has to them.. I have to ADD pills
Tell that to everyone that does make fun of me. Is that ridiculous that I have to pills for freaking ADD? that's what everyone says at least.
In my opinion... I get constructive criticism all the time on my stories, don't take it as an offence... Take it as help! No one is the "perfect writer" so just listen to their advice and don't make a fucking drama out of this! Please carry on writing this story, it has potential but don't be a fucking drama queen I like this story and want to read more but don't carry on if your going to hate every comment you get!
Ok I'm probably going to sound stupid but what is ADD?? And I like your story I admit it does need work but that can be improved once you get used to writing on here. I really like it please don't let it die. Keep writing it please.