Okay. Let me add a little tidbit. For Freaking Example: Stephanie Meyer wrote the Twilight series. Amongst the people who liked it, a lot of people hated it as well. She was given A LOT of criticism. Still, she didn't whine, complain, lash out, and stop writing completely. Catch my drift?
You guys come on! Stop being so rude about it! This fan fic! A GOD DAMN APP! This isn't an editing company so come on. How about support? Jesus is that SO hard!
I like writing. I don't do it seriously. In fact I want to be a teacher. I don't have any plans of being proffesionial. I just wanted to see if my story is good obviously it's not there fore i will stick to pencil and paper.
No we don't. This isn't harsh at all. Would you like me to be harsh? That can be arranged very quickly.
You wanna know why I don't like critisisim. It's because all my life I've been criticized my my peers. Telling me I'm to fat or to ugly there is always something wrong with me. I don't like criticizum.
No I just think you guys are too harsh. I understand critiquing and blah blah god damn BLAH! But she's new to this.. So I mean come on
Being new doesn't matter. She could be a freaking veteran, it does NOT matter. Everyone gets treated the same. Going "lightly" on somebody with criticism is only going to make them think they're creating something great, when it can be worked upon.
Seriously! You know why? Because this story is not good so far! Oh, and she refuses criticism from everyone but you. That's not going to happen! She's expecting sympathy by trying to make us feel bad by saying she is ending the story... Not going to happen. This isn't harsh, this is truth. If she'd take it to heart, and improved, this story would be good.
Yeah cuz every one on here gets criticized. Have u looked at any of THEESE things lately there's nothing.
Not everyone here gets criticized as much. If theres a mistake on any story, somebody will point it out to HELP. That's how it works. …what stories have you been reading?
Guys it's true. She has a point when you look at other stories that need work you say it simply. On the other hand, when it's this one you just try to bring her down. And no, I'm not giving her the "Oh good job! You'll do great!" crap I'm giving her the truth but in a much nicer way than "This is terrible"
In the real world, nobody cares about being nice. It's the cold hard facts. In a way, you are babying her.
All of them. I go down the list. I just don't like writing my stories on here. I'd rather stick to pencil and paper. I have a whole binder filled with stories I've written.
And no, we're NOT trying to bring it down! This whole thing started when she caught a damn attitude when people tried to help her. >.>