Apple, this is basic criticism. I know you're trying to defend her, but if she can't take this type of criticism, there are much worse people in this world that would take this further. If she can't handle it now, there's no way she can handle any other criticism.
If u would give me time to write I could prove my self. But I can't because I'm being hit with critisisim
Adam, thank you. I'm talking to her to help her and I'm proof reading and such. Just give her time I know she'll be great.
Because how would u feel under a microscope. Every word every letter in my story is being criticized I don't like it. I'm alowed to not like someone picking at my work.
(what I said looked mean out of context I'm lately responding to what you said a few pages back thank you)
Oh god. Nobody's picking at your work. They're trying to help you. I'm sorry, but you can't pick one person to give you criticism and expect nobody else to say anything.