kids these days

[*breebreenum1 (01)]

•Kids these days•

Children these days they so young and stupid
Got a couple bucks they asking for a candy cane
Eyes glued to the tv like there's nothin wrong
I mean soon u gonna be the geek in school
Bullying and teasing get out my room
I know u got the "package" but that's so uncool
There's nothing more to say about kids these days..... So I hope what u did really pays


My rap enjoy good day night evening afternoon

 

[Take_A_Chance_on_meAKA_PWND]

It sucks

 

[*oOoOAshleyOoOo (01)]

Very, PWND.

 

[renamed48891]

Eh  im sorry lol please still be my frwiend?

 

[*breebreenum1 (01)]

I'm glad u don't like it but I tried

 

[TBB-Zacmac-]

 what the hell? I'm not a rapper but I think they're supposed to rhyme :? :roll: :lol:

 

[No_Heart_Soft]

It was a rap?

 

[*breebreenum1 (01)]

I'm just beginning lol but I think I did kind okay for the challenge my mom gave me

 

[TBB-Zacmac-]

the only thing that rhymed was school and cool.....

 

[TBB-Zacmac-]

*uncool, not cool

 

[*breebreenum1 (01)]

Ik I made lots of mistakes in there like candy cane should be candy canes and the geek in school should be the geek of the school

 

[No_Heart_Soft]

Well maybe you should go back an check it before you post...

 

[*breebreenum1 (01)]

True true

 

[-ShayShay-]

Great try  

 

[Hill_]

That was a rap? I didn't noticed till it said rap...

Atleast he did 

 

[*Josh-PIMD (01)]

"I don't have to rhyme these words into a rhythm for you to know it's a rap." ~Eminem.

But really, it isn't too good. 