Blaze's POV I sat on the scratchy hay bale, the teepee tent was crammed with people. It is also dimly lit, hard to make out a beautiful singer from here. I'm still dressed in my security guard uniform, as not to get noticed. I hold a beer in one hand, a pear cider in the other; condensation slides down the sides of the 'apparently' not plastic cup. Now I can see her, Faun. I thought it would be difficult to spot her but she stuck out like a sore thumb. It seems as if she glows, her skin, eyes and mouth are brighter somehow. Her head twists and turns, s'pose she's looking for something. Then I realise, she is obviously looking for me. Her look of confusion passes over to a smile as her eyes trace my outline. She comes towards me slowly. She's dressed in baby blue denim shorts, an embroided, pink butterfly was on the left side. Her sleeveless shirt hangs loose, showing a line of her subtle pink bra. It reads:Bad girls get good things, good girls get a kick in the ass. The writing was bold, and straight edged also 3D, the thin material of the shirt itself was different shades of white, and there were splats of light pink artfully crafted behind the letters. Faun was barefoot, her feet were covered in dry mud and there's a fake rose lei on her head, her cherry red hair is in a fish tail plait that's hanging over one shoulder. Her side fringe is pinned back by a fake, white sparkly rose clip. She's breath taking and she knows how to dress for a festival.
Amazing story!! New reader BTW I also get Faun's situation. My sister was in a relationship like this.. But worse.. And so was my mom and me.. We all got out of it thankfully but unless you have gone through it, or know someone that has, it is hard to understand the mindset of the abused. Great story. Please continue
Actually my mother was and my grandmother but I know nothing about their situations that they had, I just think a lot about life.
Guys don't just say Bump! It's pointless and means nothing to me, I know you're saying you like my story, but I want to know what you truly think, give thoughts about the matter ect. But don't say: OMG! IT'S AMAZING LIKE THIS OS TOTALLY THE BEST STORY EVA coz that's just stupid and OTT
I like this story, I was in this kind of relationship to its really terrible but I just got out of it a couple weeks ago but he still thinks he owns me but I now have my brother to protect me, so I get this story, I love it.
Bump don't want this to get lost again! This is great, cherry. It's not just husbands and fathers though... It's "friends"..