Invisible

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SensualPie (01), Oct 16, 2011.

  1. I need a guy who's in cahoots with Julie. That is all. 
    Oh, and he needs to be hot. Like REALLY hot. Hotter than Damien, Ashton, and the Sun combined. 
     
  2. I need a guy who's in cahoots with Julie. That is all. 
    Oh, and he needs to be hot. Like REALLY hot. Hotter than Damien, Ashton, and the Sun combined. 
     
  3. 
    Oh my darling, I can use
    My best guy friends bio for that....
     
  4. Darn post button 
     
  5. What does "Cahoots" mean? 
     
  6. I can make a guy that hot...

    Crimson
    Goes by Crim. Has no last name

    Black shaggy hair
    Robin egg blue eyes
    Tan
    About 6 foot 2 inches
    All muscle

    Mysterious
    Flirt
    Plays hard to get
    Likes the ladies (lmao)

    Bio: Died in a motorcycle accident. His brother lived but he died. Add whatever else


    (this is based on my ex boyfriend. Whom I find fukking smoking hot. If you don't think so.... I don't know what's wrong with you)
     
  7. THIS IS AMAZING. i think you should update again
     
  8. I just read it all this mornin and it's amazing !! Keep going !!
     
  9. I shall update in a bit! 
     
  10. I shall use the Crimson character as sort of an outline, but make changes to it! 
     
  11. OMG UPDATE. AHHH SO GOODS
     
  12. Julie's POV
    ~
    I smiled as I saw Jason appear. He was my ex boyfriend, before Damien, and even Satan. He was tall, muscular, had shaggy black hair, and obsidian eyes, it looked as though he didn't have pupils. He was perfect, but he was sensitive under the tough exterior.
    And that was why I broke up with him. The ultimate test of his loyalty. And Jason still follows my orders like a slave.
    "Jason. I have a task for you."
    "Yes?" his eyes lit up. As if I would take him back.
    "I want you to find Crystal. And capture her for me. Seduce her if you have to."
    "What? Why?!"
    I traced my finger along his cheek, and stroked the back of his neck.
    "Because, I need you. You're the only one who can do it." I whispered.
    "...ok. I'll do it."
    "Thanks baby." I giggled and pressed my lips to his.
    Jason immediately kissed me back. I felt the relief in his lips, like he thought I loved him again.
    Funny how he doesn't know that I don't.

    Jason's POV
    ~
    I flew away from Julie. At least she liked me again. I couldn't take it if she didn't. It was sort of weird that my girlfriend wanted me to capture someone, even seduce them, but it's what she ordered. I would do anything for her.
    She told me Crystal usually hung out around the cemetery. I landed near a tree, and stood in wait.
    I was getting bored, when I saw a girl fly towards the tree. She sheepishly smiled at me.
    "Oh, I'm sorry. I didn't know you were here."
    "It's ok. What's your name?"
    "Crystal."
    Crystal was, really, REALLY pretty. She had long black hair, she was tall, slender, and the prettiest grey eyes.
    "I'm Jason." I grinned. Crystal blushed. Why would Julie want me to take her away? Knowing Julie, she wouldn't do the nicest things to Crystal.
    "So, Crystal, how about you go out with me today?"
    "I have a boyfriend."
    "Aw come on. It'll be fun." I coaxed.
    Crystal reddened, and looked down.
    "Sorry, but no."
    I stepped forward, gently taking her hand.
    "Crystal- OUCH!"
    I grabbed my cheek where she slapped me.
    "Stay away from me you freak!"
    Crystal disappeared entirely.
    Julie was going to be pissed.