Invisible

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SensualPie (01), Oct 16, 2011.

  1. I need to add to the storyline! 
    Thinking Face 
     
  2. Julie tells crystal about bot trusting Damien?

    Just a suggestion.
     
  3. Nah Damien's a good guy.
    But that made me think of something EXTREMELY elaborate.
    Muahahahahaha 
     
  4. Oh,I await impatiently my gal. 
     
  5. Patience is a virtue! 
    A virtue I happen not to have 
     
  6. That's makes the both of us.
     
  7. Lolz. 
    I shall update in a few!
     
  8. you better this is AMAZINGGG
     
  9. I LOVE YOUR STORIESSS
     
  10. Julie's POV
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    I watched as Crystal flew away. She said she wanted to visit her parent's house. I smiled. That gave me just enough time.
    Damien was sitting under a tree. I put on my most seductive face and floated over, smirking playfully.
    "Damien." I said.
    He looked up, and raised an eyebrow.
    "Oh, it's you."
    "I'm offended. You should be happy to see me."
    "Happy to see the person who cheated on me with Satan? No."

    I frowned. I thought it would've been easier to talk to him. Apparently me kissing my so called "master" was so horrible, but him getting kicked out of Heaven for lusting over Crystal wasn't so bad? I'd thought we were even.
    "That was a one time thing."
    Damien laughed bitterly.
    "Yeah. I doubt it."
    "But I"-
    "Look, don't you have a job to do?" he interrupted and stared at me, controlled rage in his eyes. He sounded so calm it was scary, even to me.
    Damien turned away and disappeared. Only ghosts that were dead for about a year could do that. I glared in the direction he left from, and flew away.
    I knew it sounded cliché, but if I couldn't have Damien, then Crystal sure as Hell couldn't.
    She would have to die.
     
  11. Heheh... evil plan formulating! 
     
  12. MWAHAHA!
    Bitch time.
     
  13. I'm curious what the censored word is... 
     
  14. I tot Crystal already dead?
    hmmm neva mind

    Anyway.....

    I LURV your story
     
  15. She's already dead, but you can be sent to hell for eternal suffering.