Invisible

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SensualPie (01), Oct 16, 2011.

  1. Urg I might add in a new character. It has to be a guy.  I'm not good at making guy characters. 
     
  2. bump. By the way that was the end of chapter one. 
    Should I continue?!?!
    Moar, or Heck No?
     
  3. Bump... Can I get at least three Moars? 
     
  4. write more and I'll review the story
     
  5. Urgh can't spell MOAR PLEASE!!!!
     
  6. Ok. I is convincd. 
    Expect one MOAR post for the night 
     
  7. MOAR!!! 
     
  8. PLEASE LET HER LIFE PLEAESE BRING HER BACK TO LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  9. Sorry I fell asleep last night! 
    I'll post in a few 
     
  10. Yay but please let her come back to life
     
  11. You'll see what happens. 
     
  12. I opened my eyes. I was in a room. One side was red, and fiery. The other side was a blinding white. I couldn't see anyone, but the thing that took me away, and the guy, who removed his hood.
    "You should stand up." he murmured.

    His hair was so blonde it was almost white, and he had a pair of piercingly icy blue eyes. He was tall, and muscular, and... well, beautiful. His face was expressionless as I struggled to my feet, still weak.
    "Where are we?" I asked.

    Suddenly, a booming voice shrieked across the room. My eyes snapped forward. Two men, one in a red robe
     
  13. Sorry that was short! I'm putting up more soon. 
     
  14. I opened my eyes. I was in a room. One side was red, and fiery. The other side was a blinding white. I couldn't see anyone, but the thing that took me away, and the guy, who removed his hood.
    "You should stand up." he murmured.

    His hair was so blonde it was almost white, and he had a pair of piercingly icy blue eyes. He was tall, and muscular, and... well, beautiful. His face was expressionless as I struggled to my feet, still weak.
    "Where are we?" I asked.

    Suddenly, a booming voice shrieked across the room. My eyes snapped forward. Two men, one in a red robe