Invisible

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SensualPie (01), Oct 16, 2011.

  1. And You said when someone is murdered, they can not rest until the person that killed them is dead. So Julie got put in hell so wouldn't Crystal be able to go to heaven or hell now?
     
  2. Julie was literally put in hell. Like shoved into a portal leading to hell, not being sent to hell by Satan or god.  So since Crystal's alive because like Julie, she too was shoved into hell. Nobody died yet. 
     
  3. PIE WILL U PLS UPDATE THIS STORY
     
  4. Bump!! Update soon!!!
     
  5. Mango duck

    Spam

    Pass it on! Only on people's wall. (prob get bypassed in forums)

    If u get one u are super kewllllz.

    It's good luck.
     
  6. Updateeee
     
  7. Crystal's POV
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    Holy mother of god. It was sweltering in hell! I mean, I expected it, but I didn't think it would be this extreme. There was an ongoing chorus of souls screaming and wailing, and demons snickering as they tortured them.
    I turned, looking to see the guy in the red robe. The devil. He didn't even look at me, but his soft chuckles indicated he knew I was there.
    "You're finally in your true place."
    "I hate to burst your bubble, but I'm not who you think I am." I snapped.
    The devil irritatedly turned around, shooting me a glare. His eyes locked with mine, and they widened in surprise.
    "You're not Julie..."
    ~
    Short update. But I got inspired again 
     
  8.  at last.
     why so short?
     give us more!
     
  9. Can you guys... you know, spread the word about me updating? I can't send update wall posts to everyone that's read this 
    Pretty please? 
     
  10. Check campus chat!!! 
     
  11.  thank chuuuuu
     
  12. Update !! 
     
  13. You're welcome 