Invisible

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SensualPie (01), Oct 16, 2011.

  1. I already finished watching Death Note it was on of my first watched animes..but I haven't watched the live-action movie ._.
     
  2. That makes me love you. 
     
  3. I started reading this morning and I can't put it down! MOAR
     
  4. This story is really good too  
     
  5. "Crystal."
    I turned around, to see Fiona floating there. She looked upset, yet she wore a snarky expression on her face. What was she doing here?
    "Hey Fiona! Nice seeing y"-
    "Don't even bother." she interrupted.
    I arched an eyebrow at her.
    "Since my first plan didn't work, I need to tell you the truth."
    "Plan? The truth? What the hell are you talking about?!" I stuttered.
    "Ashton didn't commit suicide. Some fallen angel named Raven caused an accident and he was killed in it."
    "Raven? I know her"-
    "Fiona!" a shout rang out behind us.

    We all turned to see a girl about my age, she had long black hair with blue tips, the same as her giant wings. She had an angry and hurt look, like somebody betrayed her. Perhaps they had.
    "I can't believe you, Fiona! Why would you say that?!"
    "I'm only doing what I was told." she spat.
    "Who told you to do anything?!" I shouted.
    "Who else? Julie." Fiona snickered.
    "B-but she's in hell!"
    "Not for long."

    Fiona's pupils disappeared, and a red energy surrounded me. I was being pulled towards her with an uncontrollable force, no matter how I struggled, I was kept in place.
    "Damien! Raven! Help!" I shouted.
    They just looked desperately confused.
    "Crystal… we can't see you two!"
    "I've been practicing with my powers. Wouldn't you say they're pretty awesome?" Fiona snickered. "And since you didn't take the bait and get pissed, and come to me for help instead of your stupid boyfriend, like I originally wanted, I'll just have to get rid of you without an elaborate plan."

    Fiona unsheathed a necklace with a sapphire in the center, and she held it in front of my face. Suddenly, I felt all the energy being drained from me. As I got weaker, the sapphire brightened in color. A misty grey entered the necklace, and all I saw was the curve of Fiona's lips before I blacked out.

    Fiona's POV
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    Despite hearing Raven and Damien shout after me, I carried Crystal's body with me, back to the room with the portal to Hell. I dropped Crystal on the floor, and took out the necklace.
    Pulling the lever on the wall, I squinted against the flames, and finally opened my eyes a minute later. Julie hovered in the portal, arms crossed.
    "Well? Is she dead?"
    "Actually, no. But I have her soul in this." I held up the necklace. Julie's eyes widened.
    "How did you do that?!"
    "I've had spare time to practice. Now put it on before the devil notices." I firmly say.
    I threw the necklace into the portal, and Julie caught it by the chain. She put it on, and the sapphire flashed before she slowly faded to an exact version of Crystal. The real Crystal morphed into Julie.
    Julie floated out of the portal, and with the flick of her wrist, put Crystal inside the portal. She grinned.

    Then she hovered to the wall, and snapped the portal shut.
     
  6. This hasn't been updated in forever... 
     
  7. OMG OMG OMG Another update please 
     
  8. Lol they switched places…
    Bad things may occur! 
     
  9. Yup...update Blood On The Ice soon please!! 
     
  10. OMG

    So freaking awesome
     
  11. We need an update. Not want, but need. As in food and shelter need. So bump!!