Invisible

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SensualPie (01), Oct 16, 2011.

  1. Ohmigosh! What the LUMP is gonna happen next?!
    You'll find out 
     
  2. When I opened my eyes, I was an a dark room. There was unbearable heat all around, and I was tied to a chair with spiked wires.
    I struggled to get free, but the wires cut deeper into my wrists if I moved. I gave up and tried to ignore the fact that I was bleeding.
    Suddenly, Julie floated forward, with Jason behind her. She had an evil grin on her face.
    "Oh Crystal. I warned you. And now here we are." she laughed.
    "What is this for? Are you crazy?!"
    "Crazy? Yes. And you know exactly what this is for."

    Julie pointed her finger to a lever on the wall.
    "Jason? Be a dear and pull the lever."
    Jason hesitantly flew over to the lever, poised to pull it.
    "What does this do?"
    "Just do as I say!" Julie snapped.
    Jason hesitated, and pulled the lever. The wall in front of me opened, and flames whipped out, missing me by a few feet. The heat was terrible now. I squinted my eyes.
    "This is a portal to Hell, Crystal. And I hear it's nice this time of year."

    Julie grabbed the back of the chair.
    "Julie! What are you doing?" Jason shouted.
    "What does it look like?! I'm getting rid of her forever! She ruined my life!" Julie slapped me, and the pain didn't register. I was numb, and I was terrifyingly angry.
    "No! You killed me! You ruined MY human life! I can't see my parents anymore, I can't talk to them, and only because Damien Fell for me!" I shouted.
    Julie whipped around, eyes full of hate. "How did you know that?!"
    "Damien told me everything. No wonder he broke up with you. You're a psychopath." I spat.
    "Damien? This is about Damien?" Jason said. He sounded hurt.
    "Jason get a clue. It's ALWAYS been about Damien. And she's keeping him away from me!"
    "But I thought you"-
    "What? You thought I LOVED you? That's pathetic Jason. Now push her into the portal."

    Jason was devastated. He had a pained look on his face, and he sadly flew over to me. Julie floated next to hum looking triumphant.
    "Hurry up Jason." Julie snapped.

    A glint of rage sparked in Jason's eye, and he grabbed Julie by the arm.
    Before she could get away, he dragged her along to the portal.

    Jason pushed her into Hell.
     
  3. Gasp! 
    That's all for Julie. She's goneee. 
     
  4. more. I read it all this morning! 
     
  5. Well,I'm damned in hell....
     
  6. But if I was already buddy-buddy with Satan does that?.....
     
  7. Nah. Satan's a bad guy anyways. No remorse 
     
  8. I was told to bump this up... so bump. 
     
  9. You'll get an update after school. 
     
  10. I reaaaally like this story. Update!
     
  11. Pleaseeeeeeeeee update?!??