Nikolai just stood and stared at the creature, with eyes filled with fear and horror. That was when rage hit him, he jumped at the beast grabbing it from behind just as it was about to go for his mom. He had grabbed the knife of the cake, a nice big sharp one and he started stabbing it with hatred, not stopping even at all the slashes from the demon spawn. Just as he was about to brutally murder it, the beast leaped into the portal dragging Nikolai with it.... Nikolai was astonished to where was, at his feet lay the monster the dragged him here that had bled to death. He looked up at the sky, there was not clouds but visions of betrayal, backstabbing and hate. Then he started scanning the landscape with fear, many thoughts raises his mind, such as where was he? Was he in hell? Was his mother and sister ok? Nikolai had to relaxed and thats what he did. Far away in the clearing close to what seemed a sun was a huge palace, so Nikolai started to make his way there clutching the knife tightly in his hand. He finally reached the enormous entrance, the huge wall was lined with sculptures of death and envy. He gulped and walk in. He immediately got restrained by two guards. He stopped in his tracks. A tall man who looked around 50 years old, but he felt he was older, a strong presence surrounded him, he was instantly intimated by him
Benny! It's lovely! I give you my seal of approval! Approval! It's lame, I know. Accept it anyway. But proofread, dearie. I only saw a mistake or two. So, proofread. And I love it. So, BUMP-A-DO!