Imperfect

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *pikachu99 (01), Mar 15, 2012.

  1. The bell was about to ring to let us out of gym, and I always tried to be the first one changed and out of the locker rooms. Mainly because Trisha, the head cheerleader, liked to pull pranks on people while they were showering. Ugh... Trisha. She was a flyer, meaning she was little. She thinks she's the best there is. Not only on the squad, but at life. She feeds off of her "daddy's money". Ugh again. As I was putting my shirt on, her stone-cold, grey eyes shot me a hardcore stare. It was one of those kind of stares that when you see them staring at you through the corner of your eye, so you cock your head looking at them and they just keep staring. Like really, bro? Are your eyes just going to burn a hole in the back of my neck? Is that what you're trying to do?
    "Natalie... Is it?" She hissed at me.
    Her bright red lips were stained with "Sephora's Rockin' Red" lipstick.
    "What do you want, Tabitha?" I said back, making sure I got her name wrong. She made a fake gasp and continued to speak.
    "I want you, to stay away from Bruce," She commanded me like I was her slave or something.
    "Why? He's not YOUR boyfriend. Wait, that wouldn't matter anyways. I'd still talk to him, even if y'all were dating."
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    I feel like no one's reading. Not even my own sister knows about this story, and she practically lives on Fan Fic. ~.~
     
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  6. She looked shocked that I just said that to her.
    "You're going to regret that, Natalie Klein! You really are!"
    "Just see if I care," I snapped at her. That was the first time I stood up to Trisha since second grade.

    ~FLASHBACK~
    There i was with Al, playing with our dolls. Trisha came up to me and ripped my little baby out of my hands.
    "No!" I screamed at Trisha as I was getting up.
    I was infuriated by that chick that took my little Susie.
    "Finder's keepers, loser's weepers!" She chanted over and over again.
    I ran over to her and pulled at her hair.
    "GIVE ME BACK SUSIE!!!!" I screamed at her while kicking her shin and stepping on her toes with the other foot.
    "Ow! Ow! Ow!!" she yowled in pain. "Mr.Zeintech! Mr.Zeintech!" The little munster yelled.

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    NOTE:The next post will be the rest of the flashback.:)
     
  7. ~CONTINUE FLASHBACK~

    "Natalie pulled my hair, kicked my shins, stepped on my toes, AND, as if the pain wasn't enough, SHE WOULDN'T LET ME SHARE HER DOLL WITH HER!!"
    "That's bull-corn!" My little seven year old voice shouted back. "She took Susie, AND refused to give her back!!"
    "Natalie, Trisha get your butts to the principal's office right now, before I escort you myself!"
    I felt my eyes getting watery as I walked down the hall with Susie in one hand and Trisha across the hall from me. I made sure Trisha didn't get near Susie. When we made our way to the principal's office, Mrs.Condor(The principal) sent Susie to the nurse, and announced me to go to counseling for the rest of the year Tuesday and Thursday of every other week and gave me a note to give to my parents.
    ~END FLASHBACK~

    From that moment on, I've despised Trisha.
     
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