Immortality

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *blondie11 (01), May 21, 2011.

  1. CHAPTER 14: Tree! BRANCH!!!

    Alexandra, Damon and Charlie began snowboarding down to the bottom. Alexandra saw something in the corner of her eye and turned to her right. "Whoa! Wait, that cliff is 3 times higher than the one we jump off... Why don't we ever jump off that one? It looks so fun." Alexanda said shocked.

    Charlie let out a loud chuckle. "Wow you are such a blonde, there are huge spikey rocks down their, I don't think you would enjoy a few broken bones."

    "Oh, wow. Ok then, no giant cliff then!" Alexandra answered back.
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    The small group skied for a few hours. Alexandra was just so happy that they were in the fresh outside air, without having any accidents.

    For some reason though, Alexandra had a weird feeling. Something was wrong. She didn't know what it was, but every once in a while she got these feelings. Then, she heard it.

    All three of their heads turned to the condo, as they saw the windows shattering into a million pieces.
     
  2. Lol i pressed send on accident  it wasnt done. Lol but ok
     
  3. CHAPTER 15: Tree! BRANCH! Part 2

    "Oh. My. Gosh! What's happening!" Alexandra screamed as they all took off their boards and sprinted for the condo.

    "Alexandra watch out!" Charlie screamed. That's when she saw it, a branch was being swung at her face. She knew what to do. She focused on the branch and slowed down time.

    She saw who the culprit was, it was Bella. Alexandra watched her as she swung the branch for her. She was just about to reach out and grab it easily, but Damon jumped in front of her. She couldn't let him get hit. She easily grabbed him and threw him to the ground, and now the branch was inches from her face. She grabbed the large branch out of Bella's hands, and watched her face slowly turn into shock.

    Alexandra then put time back to normal and swung the branch she now held, for Bella's face. The impact of the branch to Bella's face was so hard it shook the whole forest. Bella immediatly dropped to the ground, and crawled into the forest screaming in agony.

    Alexandra looked down at Damon quickly. He was still in complete shock of what just happened, "What the HECK just happened?!" he asked quickly. But before Alexandra could answer Charlie yelled at them, and Alexandra looked up to see Richelle, Alexis, and Shelby jump out of the trees.

    "Nice to see you all again! Have you come for another beating?" Charlie asked.

    "Nope, we just came to watch the show." Alexis answered with a snarl.

    "What the heck is this loser talking about?" Damon asked as he got up from the snow. As he said that, all three of the Specials lunged for each of them. Alexandra immediately swung for Alexis's face as she neared her. Alexis stumbled a bit, but picked hersleft up, and started throwing punches and kicks. Alexandra easily defended herself and for a few seconds looked over at Damon and Charlie.

    Damon wrestled Shelby to the ground as she clawed at his face, he then hit her head with a rock, knocking her out for a few seconds, and throwing her against a tree. When she came back to conciousness, she stumbled into the forest.

    Richelle charged for Charlie, once she reached him, he grabbed her hand and threw her over his shoulder. She landed on a pointy branch, that impaled what looked like her heart. Alexandra knew Charlie was going to have to kill her. Alexandra quickly turned away as Richelle let out one last scream.

    Alexandra went back to her fight, and quickly got tired of Alexis attempting to hurt her again. "So you think you're soooo bad, huh?!" Alexandra yelled as she grabbed Richelle's long hair and flung her into the forest as hard as she could.

    She ran into the forest to finish off the Specials. She couldn't find any of them, so she walked back to Damon and Charlie, angry as ever. "We need to find Jack and Qin. NOW." she demaded.

    That's when they heard the piercing screams. They turned their heads to the Condo, and immediately started running full speed to what they saw.
     
  4. Why you make us so weak? :cry:
     
  5.  im a woman killer. Literally. 
     
  6. CHAPTER 16: Five Becomes Three

    Alexandra was running as fast as she had ever ran to the condo. Damon, Charlie and her had all heard the piercing screams and knew it could only be Qin and Jack.

    They all finally reached the bottom of the cliff. They would have to climb up the long hill next to it. Breathing heavingly Alexandra looked up at the condo and saw one black cloaked figure step out of the broken windows of the condo. "Its him..." Charlie wispered. As soon as he said that, Danny looked down the cliff, and stared right into all of their eyes with pure hatred. He flicked his wrist, and out came Adelynn and Ever, dragging Qin and Jack behind them. Jack was dangling in the arms of Ever, most likely knocked out.

    Qin though, was putting up the fight of her life. She was kicking and screaming, doing anything possible to get away from them. "Qin!!! Get out of her grip!" Alexandra screamed.

    "Ah, but it's too late for your friends, Alexandra." Danny said sternly.

    "Wha...???" but before she could finish Danny tossed something into the air. A few seconds later, two small things hit the white, snow covered ground. Damon quickly bent over to examine what it was. He grabbed the two small circular things in his hand. He calmly stood up, and opened his hand in front of Charlie and Alexandra.

    Inside his hand were Jack and Qin's rings. Tears came into all their eyes, as they relized what was to come. "We can't give up on them." Alexandra said as she began to cry.

    All of a sudden Danny vanished from atop the cliff and appeared infont of all three of them. "Came for the show haven't you?" and at that very second of saying that, Damon lifted his arm, and punched Danny as hard as he could. The impact sounded like cement being hit by a fist. Damon went down in agony, while Danny stood uneffected.

    Danny looked at all three of them, and said. "None of you can ever hurt me again, I'm now more powerful than even Immortals, and now you will watch as your friends are murdered, right infront of your puny little eyes."

    "Why are you doing this!" Charlie screamed as he fell on his knees.

    "Because, I want to rule this puny, dirty world, and the only thing standing in my way... are you THINGS. Which is why, I will kill you all, ONE BY ONE." With saying that, he raised his arm, and signaled to Adelynn and Ever.
     
  7. It seriously wouldn't let me post the origional chapter  it kept saying "the forum will not except your post" or something like that. It took me almost an hour to post it 
     
  8. NOOOOOOOOO I don't wanna die 
     
  9. More updates coming soon 
     
  10. Yes! Sooner please  lol
     
  11. CHAPTER 17: Death

    Alexandra, Damon and Charlie looked up in horror as they saw the people they have been with, for thousands of years, thrown off the cliff by Adelynn and Ever, without any emotion.

    All they could hear were Qin, and Jacks piercing screams as they were thrown off and fell through the air. The last thing they all heard, was the impact of Jack and Qin hitting the rocks below.

    "NO!!!" Alexandra cried as she sprinted to the cliff bottom. Danny instantly grabbed her before she even got a few steps away. "LET GO! PLEASE!!! LET ME GO!" Alexandra screamed over and over again, until she didn't have any breathe in her anymore.

    Danny calmly let go of her, and let Alexandra fall in the cold snow. When she attempted getting back up, he kicked her back down.

    She rolled over to her side, and looked into Damon and Charlie's eyes. That's when she relized something. Danny didn't kill Qin and Jack, he didn't do squat! It was all Adelynn and Ever.

    She knew what she was going to do, and quickly thought it out. She looked at Charlie, hoping he had heard her thoughts, and he slowly nodded, telling her yes.

    She knew Damon would get the plan quickly, and go with the flow. She quickly turned towards Danny, and he gave her one last knockout-breath-ninja-kick.

    She quickly grabbed his leg and pulled herself up, and pushed him onto the snow. As fast as lightning he got back up with ease, and came inches from her face. "I'm going to make sure your friends are dead, now if I so ever see ANY of you move, I will give you the same fate as those pieces of dirt i've killed... Adelynn! Ever! Come and make sure these... things stay put!" and with saying that Danny walked away, as Adelynn and Ever swooped down to the three of them.

    Alexandra quickly stumbled to Damon and Charlie. "Do we know the plan?" she quickly wispered.

    "Kill them...right?" Charlie asked still wispering. As Damon finally caught on.

    "For Qin and Jack!" she wisper screamed.

    "STOP TALKING!" Adelynn screamed as she punched Alexandra in her face. At that point, Alexandra wasn't taking anymore from these people. She quickly grabbed Damon and Charlie, and slowed down time around them. The real fighting then began.
     
  12. Qin and Jack are going to be so mad  *runs and hides under her bed*
     
  13. Oh snap they deaddd  maybe there could be some sort of helicopter at the bottom of the cliff that caught them  i dunno, im just glancing on and on
     
  14. No no not glazing I meant blabbing like as in talking
     
  15. Haha nope just rocks down below  I have a plan though  this story isnt over yet mwahahaha!
     
  16. Charlie!!!  I didnt even notice it was you lol wazup my immortal brotha! Wow... I'm talking weird today 
     
  17. Yeah me!!! TEAM EVER!!!! 
     
  18. Lol it was really hard not pairing your name Ever with the word "ever" I dont think I'm updating anymore tonight. I took my vitamins, so I'm CRAZY!! 
     
  19. Haha I love my name Ever cause it's so amazing, and you never here it as a name of a person!!! 