Immortality

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *blondie11 (01), May 21, 2011.

  1.  ill try to get a new chapter within the hour. I just need to plan it out (I'm a planner can't ya tell )
     
  2. We gotta be really close siblings, ok?
     
  3. CHAPTER 11: Brother and Sister

    During sometime in the night Alexandra heard someone quietly sneak into her room. She turned her wet face away from the door, and turned to the wall. She knew who it was, and honestly wasn't in the mood to talk to him, or really anyone for that matter. "Go AWAY" Alexandra yelled into her pillow.
    "I'm not going to let my own sister suffer like this. You don't deserve any of this." said Charlie.
    "Charlie I'm not suffering! Just SHUT UP... Please!" Alexandra begged.

    "Alexandra, I'm here to help. I know you see things. Things you can't explain either. I know how it feels." said Charlie reassuringly.

    "You don't get it ok, you don't know how it feels. How could you possibly know I see things?! Yelled Alexandra.

    "Im your brother, you idiot. I know everything that goes on with my sister, and Alexandra... You aren't the only one that sees things." declared Charlie.

    "Charlie, what the **** are you talking about?" asked Alexandra as she sat up slowly.

    "I can't explain it... I just fall into peoples thoughts, dreams, fantasies, you name it. I can control it yea, but it's hard to not get, ummm how can I put this... Sucked into peoples thoughts I guess." answered Charlie who was now looking into Alexandra's eyes.

    "Why didn't you tell me before?" asked Alexandra with pleading eyes.

    "The same reason you didn't tell me any of your problems or other powers. It's scary I know, but together I think we can make it through all this." answered Charlie with a smile.

    "So, you know all my secrets?" said Alexandra with a shocked look on her face.

    "Well, most of them. I try to stay out of the well, you know, kinda crazy ones. Our secrets are safe with us of course. I promise I'll never tell anyone anything. Just please, please stop getting hurt. It scares me all the time when I see you black out or worse things than that." said Charlie.

    "I'm so sorry that I keep secrets from everyone including you." Alexandra said as she began crying again.

    "Please, don't cry Alexandra." said Charlie as he hugged her and held her tight. "I'm tired of seeing you so hurt. Everythings going to be alright" said Charlie soothingly.
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    A few hours later she slowly opened her eyes to Charlie walking to the bathroom and waving his hand over the broken mirror glass. The glass immediatly put itself back together.

    Before Charlie noticed Alexandra awake, she closed her eyes and relaxed her mind, and fell into a deep dream.
     
  4. I don't really have any big parts left  I could make you a Special? Yea I'll do that. Any name you prefer?
     
  5. Alright tomorrow I will try to update, but I'm going to go party it up BLONDIE STYLE! (by that I mean going to se the Hangover 2 ) so I'll try to post...  you all and goodnight, well it's 2:09 AM, so good almost morning?
     
  6.  yes yes I know ALL your secrets
     
  7. MORE!!! And what happened to the evil people? :mad:
     
  8. Im giving the evil people time to recover from their beating  haha you loser. Just got back from track, so I'll try to update soon, once I'm done puking my guts out 
     
  9. Haha time for us to recover -_-
     
  10. CHAPTER 12: The Intruder

    "Ey! Wake up loser, I'm making migas for breakfast!" yelled Charlie as he threw a pillow at Alexandra's face.

    "Mmmm go away... I'll get up soon... Uno secondo por favor" mumbled Alexandra tiredly.
    Charlie then let out a slight chuckle and exited the room. A few minutes later someone quietly snuck into the room. "Ummm, can't you see a girl is sleeping in here?! I mean really go away, i'm tired."

    Whoever it was walked to her bed, and casually sat down. "Oh my GOSH, get out, you stupid idiot!" Yelled Alexandra as she sat up. She let out a quick gasp. "Oh gosh, Damon! I'm so sorry, I didn't notice it was you..."

    He quickly raised his finger to her lips, "Shhhhh, don't you dare apologize... I should be the one apologizing. Alexandra... I'm so sorry. I'm sorry for yelling at you, I'm sorry for not protecting and watching you, I'm sorry for me walking away from you and leaving you in the snow, and I'm sorry for all the secrets I've kept from you."

    "Damon, what are you talkin about? It's all my fault, don't say your..." but before Alexandra could finish, Damon crushed his lips against hers. They both fell back onto the bed and held each other, and moved their hands through each others hair. The kiss seemed to last a lifetime, it was the most wonderful thing Alexandra had been through.

    All of a sudden Damon sat up, and looked into Alexandra's eyes. "Alexandra?" he asked.

    "Yes Damon?" Alexandra asked short breathed.

    "I love you" Damon said with piercing eyes.

    Alexandra wanted to burst out in tears. She and Damon had been together for hundreds, even thousands of years, and neither had ever said those three wonderful words. She took a deep breathe and said, "I love..." but before she could finish, Jack and Qin walked in the bedroom.

    "Hey! Breakfast is ready..... Oh! Jeez, sorry we walked in on you guys, we will let you guys get back to business. Sorry!" they both yelled as they quickly closed the door.

    "ARE YOU SERIOUS?!?! Why now!" Yelled Alexandra with pure rage. Damon quickly let go of Alexandra, and rolled onto the floor, holding his face.

    "You. Have. Got. To. Be. Kidding. ME!" Damon yelled into his hands.

    Alexandra stared at the ceiling, in pure shock. The most perfect moment almost happened, and it had been crushed in an instant. She reached down to the floor, where Damon was yelling to his hand. "Damon, honey... It's ok." she said calmly, as she grabbed his hands away from his face.

    "It's not ok Alexandra. Let's just... I don't know pick up on all this later. Are you hungry?" he asked, as he picked her up off the bed.
     
  11. Jeez, I write long chapters sorry guys haha, I'm a detail drama freak haha 
     
  12. I'm fine with it lol
     
  13. Ahhhh my brain hurts 
     
  14. CHAPTER 13: Split Up

    All five of the Immortals ate their breakfast silently and quietly. "Mmmm, these migas are really good Charlie!" Qin said enthusiasticly.

    "Haha thanks Qin! It was really hard making these." he replied nicely. "So when do you guys think Danny will figure out where we are?"

    "Well we have over 100 safe houses over the world. It will take him a while to figure out where we are." Jack replied calmly.

    Alexandra quietly moved her food around on her plate, just thinking about everything that has happened in the last few days. Damon quickly kicked Alexandra's foot, as he noticed she was staring into space. She quickly looked up and saw Charlie giving her the strangest look. "Everything ok, Alexandra?" he calmly asked.

    "Yea, I just need some fresh air. I think I'll go snowboarding for a bit." she replied as she quickly got up and washed her dish.

    "Can I join you? Damon asked with a smile on his face.

    "Yea, me too. I hate being inside." Charlie stated.

    "Yea, sure. Just no more crazy jumping ok? I don't want to black out again. What about you Jack and Qin, are you just going to stay here?" Alexandra asked.

    Jack looked at Qin and they didn't even speak. They just telapathically spoke to each other. Alexandra wished she had that power. She thought it was the most coolest thing anyone can have. Jack turned to Alexandra and said, "We think we're just going to skip this one out, ok? We are just really tired. We will make an epic lunch when you get back!"

    "Sounds good! Ok guys let's go get suited up." Charlie said.

    They all went to their rooms, and got their suits on. "Alright guys, keep the house safe. No crazy parties while we're gone!" Alexandra yelled with a big grin on her face.

    "Haha! Get going you losers, have fun! No crashes please!" Qin yelled jokingly.

    Alexandra, Damon, and Charlie walked to the balcony, and they all quickly leaped off. They all latched on their boards to their feet, and landed with ease on the snow down below.