Immortality

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *blondie11 (01), May 21, 2011.

  1. *highfive* for us shy jocks out there. And ok u should make Charlie find a nice, nonsluttly, funny girl  lol
     
  2. *highfive* for us shy jocks out there. And ok u should make Charlie find a nice, nonsluttly, funny girl  lol
     
  3.  sorry double post
     
  4. Hahaha I'll pair you up with Qin  haha jk I'll figure out someone. It will be later in the story though, much later.  just have to plan it all out now.
     
  5. CHAPTER NINE: Crash and Burn

    "Ey! The rocks are coming up soon you losers, be ready!" yelled Charlie.

    "Since when do you know so much about the mountains!" yelled Jack.

    "Let's just say I come here on my free time!" replied Charlie. At that, he flew off the ledge of a huge rock and did a front flip followed by a 720, and landed perfectly. Everyone attempted doing tricks of their own, and they all stuck the landing.
    Jack, Damon and Qin led the group now and flew over more rocks. Both of them did continuous flips through the air screaming their heads off.

    "Ey, let's see how good you are at snowboarding you loser!" yelled Charlie as he pushed on, over a ledge. Both of them did flips, and spins and all the craziest moves you can think of through the air countless times. Alexandra was trying to top everyone's moves, and slid in front of everyone. She flew off a rock at top speed and everything around her suddenly went black. She went numb, and couldn't feel a thing, or even hear anything.

    She saw her dad and mom sleeping in their bed on the island. They didn't look like they were breathing or anything.

    She became scared at this point and came over to her mom and began to shake her. She wouldn't wake, and Alexandra began crying. Her dad suddenly sat up and began talking, but Alexandra couldn't hear anything. "Dad! Dad! DAAAAAD!!!" Alexandra screamed as she began to be pulled away by someone. She quickly fought the person, and turned around expecting to see Danny, but it wasn't him. It was her one and only, Damon.
     
  6.  uto what happened
     
  7. I might have a good idea Ever is the bad girl now, but maybe later like more into the story she turns good. Maybe she can help damon and Alexandra in some way. Idk just
    A thought lol
     
  8. I love this story so far!!! Yay charlie I love French toast!!!  haha
     
  9. Genius Shandi!!!! Ahhh you just gave me an awesome idea! Thank you!
     
  10. CHAPTER TEN: The Sad Truth

    "Alexandra! Hey! Wake up!" yelled Damon as he shook her awake. She immediatly regained conciousness, and saw him and instinctivly punched him right in the face as hard as she could.
    Damon backed up and fell on the ground clutching at his face moaning.
    "Whoa! Alexandra, stop! Jeez, what the heck happened up there?!" yelled Jack.
    "Oh my gosh! Damon!" screamed Alexandra, as she ran over to him.
    "Damon, oh Damon I'm so sorry! I thought I saw..." declared Alexandra.
    "Saw what?! What could I possibly do, to make you do THAT to me?!" yelled Damon as he sat up.

    "OH MY GOSH! What the heck just happened up their to you Alexandra? I've never seen a more epic wipeout than that in my entire life! Are you ok!" Charlie screamed as he sped over to the group with Qin at his side.

    "Why are you worried about her! I'm the one that got punched by probably the strongest person in the entire universe!" screamed Damon as he started walking away, back up to the condo, clutching his face.

    Alexandra turned and saw all of them staring at her. "What the heck is going on with you Alexandra?" asked Qin with pleading eyes.
    "Jeez! NOTHING!" yelled Alexandra, as she ran after Damon.

    She couldn't find him, so she started up the mountain... alone. Worst of all, a snow storm came. A few hours later before dark, she finally reached the condo. She walked into the condo, freezing, and saw everyone sitting in the living room.

    She figured that they didn't want to see her by the look on their faces, so she walked into one of the empty rooms. She took off her jacket and walked to the bathroom and combed through her hair with a comb she found.

    She stared at herself in a mirror and threw the comb at it, the mirrow instantly shattered, but she slowed down everything around her.

    She saw the comb slowly fly through the air. She saw the impact and the cracks forming, she saw the mirror breaking into pieces and shoot off the wall, and fly to her face. She quickly shut her eyes before the glass hit her face, and felt the impact of the glass.

    She let time go back to normal, and saw the glass fall off her face to the ground. Her face healed immediatly. No one knew that she could make time go slower. Not even Damon, and she was keeping it that way. She rarely used this power of hers. She didn't want anyone to know her secret, and she didn't know if anyone else had it.

    She walked out of the bathroom and fell onto the bed, and cried herself to sleep. She didn't know why any of this was happening to her, and just wanted to vanish.
     
  11. :0 *hugs* there there it will be ok
     
  12. Haha thank you, thank you  see? I'm pretty good at writing drama... Hmmm i'm on an updating streak!
     
  13. Thanks for thinking my idea was good I thought it might help alittle
     
  14. It will help for ideas in the end  I have a plan from your idea now, thanks 
     
  15. Lol Charlie!!!  your comments make my day haha ur too funny
     
  16. Can I be like your best friend or your brother in the story so then I could talk to you and hug you without ur bf getting mad?
     
  17. Welcome anytime if u need anymore ideas I'm always thinking lol
     
  18. Oh wow... Before I wrote all this I planned on having a brother in it actually, and I thought that would have been creepy for you or Jack hahaha but yes, since you are ok with it, I'll somehow make it that you are my brother haha  this is going to be beast 
     
  19. Haha fun stuff!!!!
     
  20. When r u gonna post the next chapter?