I'm no ordinary girl

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -PA_Veronica-, Jun 12, 2012.

  1. [Color=pink/] hey [Pink/]
     
  2. Ugh this is gonna take a while...
     
  3. No / on the first one. And on the second, the / goes first, not last.
     
  4. That's right, except just put [/color] on the second.
     
  5. Thanks guys I love u so much
     
  6. Update plz
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  7. Awesome Story
     
  8. My grandmother starts to fade, my legs become weak. What was going on? I'm a... A witch? But there's no such thing, or is there? I look over at my purse and decide to try a riddle my mom would sing to make the monsters under my bed disappear. I close my eyes and repeat her words:

    "object of the present,
    Be there no more,"


    I opened my eyes to find my purse was completely gone, I step back until I'm against the wall. Now how was I supposed to make it reappear? I try to think when my mom was looking for something she'd lost, she would mutter words under her breath. I close my eyes trying to remember she would say:

    "reapear reappear object of past,
    I need you to reappear,"



    I smile as I find my purse exactly as I have left it, maybe being a witch isn't so bad.

    RING

    I rush outta the bathroom to my first period class, today was deffentily gonna be magical.

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    I drop my bag on my bedroom floor and slip into the shower. I start thinking of how my mom could keep something like this from me, could she have wanted to run away from it? I ponder this for a while, how could she? This was part of my life too, I sigh as I step outta the shower.

    I slip on a low neck beach shirt and mini shorts. I sit at my desk and work on my mythology paper for English, I was still trying to decide what to do. I figured I'd just do witches, I mean I have first hand experience.

    After an hour of working on my paper I got about two pages typed, I groan only three more to go. I look at the time and jump outta my seat it's 5:30 and Lees gonna be here at 7.

    I hurry, blowing dry my hair then straighten it. I Put up a snookie poof with Bobby pins, I apply my cheery lipstick smiling. I throw on a cute mini dress and flats, I do my make up and grab my purse.

    Ding dong, dong, dong

    I groan I hate my stupid doorbell. I hear my mom open the door and voices.

    "Veronica, Lee's here sweetie," great my mom already starting to embarrass me. I skip down the step taking two at a time. My moms holding my drooling sister Samantha, great. As Lee comes in view I see he's wearing a tight polo shirt and shorts with sperrys.

    I smile "Hey Lee," I look at my mom telling her she can go now, she walks into the kitchen. Putting in Sam in a high chair.

    "Hey V, ready to go?" he smiles.

    "Yea of course," I giggle as he takes my hand in his and we walk to his Black 2012 Mustang. "Nice car."

    "yea thanks my dad he got it for me, I make quaterback for the football team, again, and he was just so proud."

    "I can tell he must of been very happy," he opens the door and I get in. He hops around to the other side gets in and speeds off.

    We get to Red lobster quicker than I expected and get in our seats.

    A waitress comes up, who looks about our age. "What can I get you sir?" she states in a flirty voice.

    Lee shifts in his seat looking uncomfortable "Babe what would you like to drink?"

    I blush as he calls me babe "Umm just a bottled water for me," I smile at her annoyed face.

    "And I'll get a coke," he looks at his menu not even glancing at the waitress.

    She stomps off looking pretty mad.

    "So" he clears his throat "V what did u get for your birthday?"

    "um well my mom wants to wait to give me my gift, but so far I've gotten $700 from my moms side of the family and $800 from my dads side. From my friends I've got rings, brackets, necklaces, and shoes. Also people I don't even know are giving me presents," I laugh.

    He chuckles "Well your kinda hard to miss, being Lil Miss Popular and all."

    "Okay Mr Star Quarterback," I giggle "I'm not the one with a new mustang parked outside and living in the biggest house in Dallas."

    "True, but you are rich with love. Everyone loves you V your amazing," he smiles taking my hand. I blush at his compliment. "I love it when girls blush, espically you."

    We continue the date laughing and chatting about school an life. After were done we head to my house, I smile "This was a great date I had so much fun,"

    He smiles "I'm glad we both did," he take my hand again his warm skin on mine.

    All of a sudden his top button to his polo shirt comes undone. I stare at it what? One hand is in mine and the other one was on the wheel. I blush realizing my powers are kicking in, I push away the thought and enjoy the ride home.

    We walk up the steps to my house, he hold my hands smiling. "V I would love to take you out again," he leans in an kisses me. My knees become weak and I savor the kiss, then my mom decides to step outside. We pull away I glare at my mom.

    "Oh sorry I was just gonna take Samantha out for a walk," she looks at my sister making weird baby noises.

    "Bye V," Lee laughs as he walks back to his car.

    "He seems nice," my mom smiles.

    "Mom! Who walks at night? Why do you keep ruining my life," I stomp inside.

    She follows me putting Sam in a highchair. "What do you mean ruining your life? Do you not want me to be apart of it?" she asks looking hurt.

    "No it's just your too involved in my personal life, yet you hide things from me."

    "What have I hidden from you? I tell you everything your the one hiding things," she points her slender finger at me.

    "Oh because I hid the biggest part of my life right? Why didn't you tell me I was a witch?" I scream.
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    Adam is that enough detail Lol. Please leave feedback I would love to know how I can make this story better. And Taylor there u go Italics I hope I did it right.
     
  9. I need more surroundings detail! XD
     
  10. Can u add more detail of wat ur looking for?
     
  11. OMG!!! Carry on, carry on! I was sooooo pulled into that story! Please write some more! loved it!
     
  12. What does the atmosphere feel like? What does it look like?
     
  13. Hmmm thanks I am I promise I just need more ideas check back in tomorrow there will b a new update okay Adam give me an example
     
  14. "The atmosphere felt dismal." "The seats were red, and the walls were white. The tables were stained-wood, and shined with the lights hanging from the ceiling."
     
  15. Oh okay I got it now I know what u mean I just don't want Otto get boring with too much details