I'm just the shy invisible girl....

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Kiaramarie (01), Aug 16, 2012.

  1. Couldn't sleep -_- so here's an update:
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    English class went by pretty quickly. It was the same for every class: fill out some paper with stuff about you, the teacher introduces themselves, then read over the syllabus and list of materials you need, then you take some paperwork home for your parents to sign. It was incredibly boring. As the teacher went on discussing the materials that we would be discussing, I sort of started daydreaming and not paying attention. The bell ringing for us to go home snapped me out of it. I looked around and noticed Mason looking at me. I quickly looked away, gathered my things and walked out the door and into the parking lot, where my mom was waiting for me.

    "Hey how was school?" mom asked smiling at me.

    "It was alright, kinda boring though, all we did was fill out some paperwork and then just chill the rest of the class for every class. I think I almost died of boredom." I replied.

    "It'll get better I promise." she said. 'Yeah I doubt that' I thought. "So did you make any new friends?" she asked.

    "No, not really, except one kid talked to me cuz he accidentally hit me on the head with a basketball and he came and apologized. His name was Mason. He's really nice, and he's in all my classes." I smile as I think of Mason.

    "Oooh, someone's already got a crush!" my mom sings.

    "Yeah right, he's just a friend" I reply.

    "Mhm." my mom smiles at me. I roll my eyes. Melanie gets to the car and opens the door and sits in the backseat.

    "How was your day?" my mom asked Melanie. 'Oh here we go >.<' I thought dreadfully. Melanie's face lit up.

    "Well, I already made tons of friends! I sat with them at lunch, our whole table was full! I had so much fun today!" she said smiling. I rolled my eyes. It figures. Like I said, she's the social butterfly, not me.

    "That's great sweetie!" my mom said happily. She pulled out of the parking lot and drove to the the middle school to pick up my brother. As I predicted, my brother also made a lot of new friends and didn't sit alone at lunch. Whatever, I didn't need a bunch of friends, I was perfectly happy with having no friends at all. I decided to change the subject.

    "Hey mom, what's for dinner?" I asked, hungrily. She smiles.

    "Guess what it is. I make it every once in a while." She looks at me with a huge grin on her face. My face lights up.

    "Lasagna???" I asked, my mouth watering. My mom nods. "Oh my god that just made my day! I love lasagna! Now I was happy. Lasagna is my most favorite thing to eat in the entire world! She laughs and starts driving home.

    "Oh and there's another surprise at home." my mom says. We know she won't tell us, so we wait until we get home. we notice a red car in our driveway. I recognized the car instantly.

    "Grandma's here?! She drove all the way down here??" I asked.

    "Yup."My mom replied. "Grandpa's here and Tio is too." We walk inside and say hi to everyone. We all talk for a bit and then eat dinner. It's so delicious! I eat seconds and then when I feel like I'm about to pop, I finish eating and put my plate in the sink. 'Thank god it's not my turn for dishes' I thought happily as I walked into my room and laid down on my bed. I was so full, and so worn out from today, that before I knew it, I had drifted off to sleep.

    I woke up about an hour later, to a quiet house. I didn't hear anyone talking. 'Where is everyone?' I thought. I opened my door and stuck my head out. There was no one in the living room. I noticed the light was on in the bathroom right across from my room. I heard the flush and the seconds later, the door opened, and my uncle steppe out.

    "Where is everyone?" I asked.

    "Oh they went out. They were gonna ask if you wanted to go but you were sleeping." he replied. "I told them I would stay here with you just in case anything happens. So it's just me and you. He replied. He sounded kinda creepy and weird. I noticed he held a beer in his hand. I kinda got worried. He always got agressive or annoying when he drank. 'I better stay away from him' I thought slowly closing my door.

    "What do you think you're doing?" he asked, sounding a little angry. He put his foot in the door.

    "I-I was just going to go in my room..." I said.

    "To do what?" He asked.

    "Nothing really." I replied, hoping he would just go away.

    "You have nothing to do? Well me neither, let's do something together." he said creepily. He stepped inside my room.

    "Like what?" I asked, taking a step back.

    "Something fun." He answered, taking another step towards me. I backed up again but my room was small, so I was already in front of my bed. He closed my door and took another step towards me. 'Someone please come home soon!' I thought frantically, wishing with all my might that someone would come home right now. *I moved away from my bed and backed up into a wall. It was the farthest away I could be from him at that moment. He stepped towards me.

    He caressed my cheek. "You're a beautiful young woman Jazmine." He started touching me. I closed my eyes and just hoped that someone would come home before things went further. He then threw me onto the bed and took advantage of me.
     
  2. Ohmygosh! What a perv! Bump!
     
  3. Bump, oh no!
     
  4. Argh! What a perv! She so doesn't deserve it! Someone would better come back soon! BUMP! LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU UPDATE!
     
  5. OH MY GOD KIARA
     
  6. You guys like? I told you it would be getting better, I just needed some time. And from here on out, it'll only be getting betterHope you guys are enjoying it!
     
  7. Oh, and I'll try and post another update today for you guys. Wouldn't want to keep you waiting!
     
  8. OMFG!!! Bump!! I love it!!
     
  9. Lovely! The conflict with her uncle is absolutely amazing! Bump bump bump!!
     
  10. Thank for the update and for me bump too,hope you update soon
     
  11. I promise I will have an update posted by the end of tonight. And I will wall all of those who want to be walled
     
  12. Here's a pretty long update for you guys;)enjoy!

    Mason's POV
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    I woke up the next morning and got ready for school. As usual the house was empty. My parents were NEVER home, but I didn't really mind. They always argued around each other. I don't even know why they got married. It didn't seem like they loved each other at all, so why do it?

    Thank god I was an only child, I had no one else to worry about but myself. I was always on time for the bus, and I'd never been late to school. I packed everything I needed into my backpack and headed to the bus stop with a smile in my face. I was in a really good mood. Maybe it was the fact that I met an amazing girl named Jazmine and I get to see her every minute of the day at school. I couldn't wait to see her again. She actually made me look forward to going to school.

    The bus arrived and I made my way to the back. Suddenly someone stuck their foot out, but it was too late for me to stop. I tripped and fell right into the middle of the aisle with a loud thud. The entire bus bursts out into laughter. My face turns bright red.

    "Yeah that's so funny. I bet if that'd happened to one of you guys you wouldn't be laughing -_-" I said.

    "Shut the hell up loser." said a random kid in the seat in front of me. I sigh, grab my backpack, and sit in the seat all the way in the back. The bus arrives at school and I'm the last one to get off. I go into the cafeteria and grab some breakfast. I look around for Jazmine but I don't see her. The bell rings or first period and I make my way to math class. I take the seat next to where jazmine had sat yesterday and waited for her to come in.

    The bell rings just as Jazmine walks in, wearing a sweater. I found that strange but I ignored it. My face lights up as I see her, and she takes the seat next to me.

    "Hey." I say, smiling at her. She looks at me.

    "Hi." she replies. She doesn't smile or anything. Actually she looks really sad. Before I can ask her what's wrong, the teacher starts talking. I kept glancing over at Jazmine the entire time that the teacher was talking. I was really curious to know what happened and what made her so sad. I caught he spacing out and she was rubbing her arm. She didn't notice me looking at her. She rolls up her sleeve and pokes at her arm. I sneak a peek and I gasp quietly. She looks shocked and quickly rolls down her sleeve. She avoids looking at me the entire time.

    'What happened to her? Where did she get that bruise from? Does she have more?' I thought worriedly. The bell rang and she grabbed her things and hurried out of the classroom. I tried to get out of my row but people were moving too slow. I hopped over the desk of another row and ran out into the hallway. I spotted Jazmine heading down the ramp to gym class, but it was hard to move quickly through the sea of students exiting the classrooms.

    I made my way down the ramp as quick as I could and ran outside. I saw jazmine walking towards the girl's locker room.

    "Wait! Jazmine!" I call, but she runs into the locker room and closes the door before I could catch up to her. I walk into the boy's locker room to change. 'I'll see her in a few minutes' I thought. I finish changing and then make my way to the gym. Inside the gym, I search for her. I spot her in a corner listening to music.

    I jog over to her. She notices me and gets up and runs into a little secluded hallway in the back of the gym.

    "Wait!" I follow her. She starts running up the stairs. I catch up to her and grab her arm.

    "Ow!" she cries, pulling away. I forgot she had a bruise there.

    "I'm sorry! Jazmine what happened to you?! Why do you have a bruise on your arm?!" I ask, highly concerned. She stays quiet, looking to the ground.

    "Do you have more?" I ask. When she doesn't move, I gently unzipped her jacket and take it off. I gasp. She's covered in dozens of bruises, not just on her arms, but her chest neck and back have bruises too. Well those were the ones I could see. She probably had more under her shirt. This was no accident. Someone did this to her on purpose. My anger boiled up inside.

    "Jazmine who did this to you? What happened?" I ask, angrily.

    "Go away please and leave me alone." she replies sadly.

    "But Jazmine, you're hurt! I wanna know who did this to you!" I say, still angry.

    "I said go away and leave me alone. It's none of your business, why should you care?" she says again.

    "I'm not leaving until you tell me what happened. I care because your my friend. Friends care about each other." I answer, putting my hand on her shoulder. She looks me up at me, her eyes watering and she stares into my eyes. Then she starts crying. I pull her into a hug and she cries into my chest. I rub her back.

    "It's ok just let it all out, I'm here for you. You can tell me anything." I say to her. She finally calms down enough and looks at me.

    "I'm ready to tell you now." she says quietly.

    "And I'm ready to listen." I say smiling at her. We sit down and she begins telling me what happened.
     
  13. Brilliant! Mason is such a sweetie! Bump:D
     
  14. Bump! Let me know when u update. What happened to her :(
     
  15. You sound like your lonely and wanting home but stick it out. Oh you smoke crack and heroin