I'm Home - A Story I Wrote

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by awesomemandy, Nov 29, 2011.

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  1. Thanks And i didnt use Google. I swear
     
    #21 awesomemandy, Nov 30, 2011
  2. Great
     
    #22 __BLU__, Nov 30, 2011
  3. Thanks
     
    #23 awesomemandy, Nov 30, 2011
  4. Good story. I suck at writing but you kinda went a little fast but I rate 4 out of 5.
     
    #24 TBB-Zacmac-, Nov 30, 2011
  5. Yeah I didnt wanna make it too long But thanks
     
    #25 awesomemandy, Nov 30, 2011
  6. your a way better writer than me, so it makes it hard to criticize yeah, it was good 
     
    #26 TBB-Zacmac-, Nov 30, 2011
  7. Haha thanks
     
    #27 awesomemandy, Nov 30, 2011
  8. Wow nice story
     
    #28 SweetCandyFloss, Nov 30, 2011
  9. Thanks
     
    #29 awesomemandy, Nov 30, 2011
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