Ok, you now need 70 points from each judge to be offered special prize/seat. And I am working on the reveiws, don't worry
Idol Fiction Ratings Goodbye Cruel World My Pain; Your Thrill Clocks Ticking Goodbye Cruel World Overall Story:6 Originality:9 Details:8 Grammer:8 Spelling:8 Storyline:7 Attitude:1 Skill:9 Total:56 Side notes:Liked the story other than the fact that it was about suicide. Didn't very much like the person. My pain;your Thrill Overall story:8 Originality:8 Details:5 Grammer:7 Spelling:8 Storyline:5 Attitude:7 Skill:7 Total:55 Side notes:I repeatedly zoned out while reading the story and forgot what was happening. Most likely I missed something but I was confused in some parts by things said and done. Maybe it was because it wasn't shown yet. I don't know.... But I can't say that what I remembered wasnt interesting. It may not have had any action, comedy, or maybe even romance. But it DID have suspense. Clock's Ticking Overall Story:9 Originality:7 Details:7 Grammer:9 Spelling:9 Storyline:8 Attitude:9 Skill:8 Total:66 Side Notes:Its the closest to an action adventure out of these three from what I can tell. And it is amazing. I simply am not sure what to say other than..... Wow.....
I'm just honored for you to even like my story. Thank you. Yes, I agree with you Mr.Percy that there are some parts that aren't typically right, but it's just an emotional story, so you typically want to feel the person. Feel what it's like to be in her shoes. And yes, it is a bit slow, I apologize. The story really hasn't even got to the real parts yet. So sorry again, and I agree with your score, and I appreciate it.
Just details crushed my heart. But it's okay, i really liked the other stories. They are really good anyway.
GOODBYE CRUEL WORLD Overall: 8 Originality: 6 Details: 9 Grammar: 8 Spelling: 8 Storyline: 6 Attitude: 6 Skill: 8 Total: 59 I really loved that it involved suicide and cutting. I really felt the person's emotions when it comes to cutting/suicide. I also enjoyed that on the last chapter, you put the 'You Are My Sunshine' song. It was like little children were singing it in my head. CLOCK'S TICKING Overall: 10 Originality: 7 Details: 8 Grammar: 8 Spelling: 6 Storyline: 8 Attitude: 7 Skill: 8 Total: 62 I REALLY loved this story. The red writings on the wall. The suspense. The fact shes really smart and figures out that maybe he's in the house. I really enjoyed it! MY PAIN; YOUR THRILL Overall: 9 Originality: 8 Details: 10 Grammar: 9 Spelling: 9 Storyline: 8 Attitude: 7 Skill: 9 Total: 69 I'm the type of person who loves a really slow story with such details. You took the time with detailing and even if it was going real slow, I enjoyed it. And still do. Most of the story is filled with thoughts and I prefer that over conversations!