Orchid's POV I lived in memories, from what the imageless doctors had said I was in a coma. I could hear what was being said but my mind was elsewhere, it would travel through space until it came to a memory. It started at baby, when my father was there, my mother was happy and Logan was simply a brother…who I loved dearly…as a brother. Then to toddler, my father was crouching at the end of the hallway, he was smiling genuinely. I wobbled towards him, he outstretched his arms and let me fall into them. My first steps. All of a sudden I was twelve, mum and Logan had gone shopping so it was just me and dad. That was when it started. He slammed me against the wall and he did it...raped me. So it continued of these horrible memories, until it came to the one where I told Logan. I stood in his doorway, silent tears trickling down my face. 'Orchid?' his voice was concerned. My tears began to loudly pour out and I told him, every bit. Dad left that day, with a look of hollowness, self-pity and resentment in his eyes. Resentment for himself. Did I mention I'm paralysed? No? Well that's another aggravating side affect of coma's. I could hear my brother now, Logan, entering the room again. His clammy hand took my frozen one. "Police, Orchid. They think I did this to you. They're going to question Jay, thanks to me. Why can't you be here? To save me. To save him. To save yourself. Soon, him or me will be behind bars," I could hear the tears, the sniffling, the choked throat,"I love you, baby sis. Don't die..." he choked out the last two words, then all was silent. Deadly silent. Eerie. Was I dying? Did I lose hope when he said that? Did I give out? Or did I just stop listening to something I couldn't control? Start running away from reality? Let fear get the better of me? The latter seems likely. --------------------- Aww Logan we feel for you, but will Orchid ever wake up? Only time will tell…
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I like this It's great. The only critique I have is about the colors… it's cool, but it gets hard to read if you're reading a lot. Especially the light colors. Other than that, it's great