I love you, my dear sibling

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Cherry1313, May 27, 2012.

  1. Bump, but… is Logan younger then Orchird? 

    Sing x
     
  2. That's odd.

    But I like the twist.

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  3. Logan's POV

    My strides were vast as I followed the crimson tears. Within seconds, I could see the mess, the giant puddle of blood, surrounding a girl.

    Her hair was drenched in the stuff, her face too but that didn't stop me getting the picture. I mean, how could it? There she lay, my baby sister, my lover, my crave, Orchid…
     
  4. I'll update later guys luv ya!




    Destiny
     
  5. Logan's POV

    Urgently, I scooped her, draining, frail body into my arms. The blood rushing out of her head immediately leaked onto my clothes.

    I ran with her, reciting the way to the hospital in my head. As I rounded corners and ran through roads, it seemed as if her body grew stronger.

    Stronger with my touch, my warmth, my over all presence. It's beyond me, Im just her brother…again.

    I rushed through the transparent, white doors. Instantly doctor's and nurses took Orchids body from my arms. I reached out for her but they batted my hands away and laid her on the stretcher. "Just wait here, for christ's sake!" a stuck up doctor ordered me about. "I'm not a fuck-ing dog, don't you dare treat me like one" I shouted at him.

    Next thing I know, something crashed onto my head, and I was on the floor. Just before I blacked out, I felt something. That thing was running out of hope, life, trust…everything.
     
  6. Awwww Updateeeee
     
  7. *pings back to the first page so I can update later on today*
     
  8. is logan bleeding tooOMG!!UPDATE!!-i needa know
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  9. What's with the short updates?;( but I still like this story!
     
  10. My update got killed So did I I'll update tomoz
     
  11. Yyyeeeaahh! Update!