I have strong feelings about you. I'm just not sure if it's

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Oct 23, 2011.

  1.  VAMPIRES?!
    I like.
     
  2. I've got good critism.













































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































    Update more often. =_=
     
  3. I like to be a bit more serious Aki. ._.

    But this is SO DAMN GOOD. -noms on story-
     
  4. HeyI updated today! 




    -pokey-

    Lies
    If my story is good why isn't anyone else commenting?
     
  5. I will now spam on my own thread
     




















  6.  
  7. cool
    story
    bro
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  8. Yay! I now 'ave another person
     
  9. Anyone who guesses my "fake" name will recieve the gift of an....update
     

  10. -sighs-

    Okai I will update in about 30 minutes
     
  11. I have a strong feeling about you. I'm just not sure if it's positive or not.

    Chapter 1 Part 2

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    The teacher knocked the blackboard for attention.

    The silence swepted over the classroom as the teachers loud voice boomed out.

    "Today we will learn about vampires. Open your book."

    The rustling of books were heard

    "Now around 300 years ago, A Vampire and Human war broke out. There were over 5 million humans that were dead because of this war. The U.S. President stepped forward and declared a treaty. This treaty has been kept for 200 years. At that time the vampires did not drink blood but they were still a terrifying specie as of today.In the news it says....." The Teacher's voice faded as Gina, Fox and Charlie started whispering.

    "Why can't they just grab all the vampires and put them in some desert or something?" Charlie hissed.

    "I know!" Fox moaned.

    "But the vampires look like us so much they probably don't know which people to catch." Gina said

    "I heard that the vampires have two long front teeth." Charlie whispered.

    I hope they won't notice

    Mina touched two of her front teeth.

    Mother trimmed it and it stung like mad. I really hope they don't notice.

    "I saw a movie and the vampires were like.. Flying around"

    That is a total lie.

    "This is a truth. I heard that vampires burn when they see a cross. So everyone wear a cross, you never know when there might be a vampire." Gina spoke lowering her voice a little.

    Mina stared at her cross necklace and started playing with a pencil.

    idiots

    "Oh and they don't eat eggplants." Charlie said

    Mina yawned and checked her lunchbox, which was full of eggplants.

    Idiotic people

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    Please be brutally honest